Reviews for Watanuki's Seven Day Trial
Dark phantom323 chapter 2 . 7/11/2013
I think you should use the table as threatened/ said in the first chapter. :p
RoxanneTheGreat chapter 2 . 1/16/2013
Watanuki should ride Doumeki! XD
yullenlover chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
I'm thoroughly entertained w/ any set-up but i totally vote for more public molestation; i love watanuki's reaction of ' .more' vs ' .focus'. awesome smut BTW, i applaud your perverseness
Yaoi69Queen chapter 2 . 11/29/2012
Hot! Your amazing! Hm, I'm thinking something out in public, like a tesse.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/11/2012
idea: you should make doumeki get watanuki drunk and when he waeks up the next mourning he has a hang over and is waer a nurs out fit that has cum all over it
Yoisy chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
That was hot!
julia chapter 2 . 4/3/2009
You TOTALLY have to write more of this. Have them do it in the shower, and...uh...well, lots of other places! HOT!
akumaherutsu chapter 2 . 4/2/2009
How bout Watinuki is so desperate his rids Doumeki? hn? The more moans the better.
ileana425 chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Scenarios, scenarios

1) S&M

2) library sex

3) shower sed
ileana425 chapter 2 . 12/27/2008
Elda (fanning neck)- Is it hat in here or what
yuMeNami chapter 2 . 12/22/2008
yay! i love this! hahaha..doumeki is so funny! Gosh! i just cant imagine how they do it..hahaha..i so love this pairing..

i was laughing like hell with this part: "HEY PUT ME DOWN YOU JERK! YOU P-PERVERT! HEY I SAID PUT ME DOWN OR I WILL SCREAM BLOODY MURDER!”...hahaha..and i just wanted to say, "Watanuki, youre screaming BLOODY MURDER already"..hahaha..write more!
syntic chapter 2 . 10/10/2008
lmao! XD Over sixty reviews, and I'm just adding onto the train aren't I?

Although I deliberately knew that if I was going to read something like this, I would suffer a story without a well-developed plot, but I can't say no the yumminess of it all *shame*. The fanfic literally spews the meaning of "yaoi," and it is such an entertaining read that I felt lightheaded after a while. XD

Please keep up the excellent work! The settings keep changing, but that's what gives this fanfic flavor and variety. Very kinky~ XD
sapphire-bubbles chapter 2 . 10/6/2008
hot. hot. HOT. definitely. you write this kind of stuff just AMAZING. and i love this pairing. you made them so natural.

hmm... something in the bath would be nice? haha.

update soon!
Lady Serena Sparrow chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
*severe nosebleed* WOW. I really need to write hardcore yaoi like this! I love this pairing and rim jobs fascinate me. Yes I am a perv. And proud of it! So, their characters are pretty intact so well done! As for your next about the good ol' shower sex? *wags eyebrows* Update please!
bluegirl99 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
I really enjoyed your fic. It was creative in capturing the true essence that is Doumeki/Watanuki's relationship. It can be awkward, but fun and in the end they both really care about each other. The naughty bits were endearing and smexy. Suggestions for the next days in Doum/Wata bet could be:

1. Doumeki decides to try out some new "toys" he bought at an adult shop, on one very embarrased Watanuki.

2. After another male student compliments Watanuki, and makes him blush, a very jealous Doumeki reminds Watanuki exactly who he belongs too, by screwing him in the Library.

Thanks for sharing you fic. It was great!
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