|Reviews for Midnight Musings|
| Would have been chapter 2 . 1/18/2015
This would have been so much better if those stupid parenthetical author inserts were removed. Every time an author breaks the fourth wall, it severely distracts the reader. You actually work against yourself; the ideal story allows the reader to suspend disbelief. Think of it this way, you're enjoying a soothing melody of symphonic music, lost in the endeavor to catch it's alluring appeal, and then some idiot shouts, "Wants some peanuts!" That is similar to an authors insert and intrusion of the story. ;jsm
| an old fashioned girl chapter 2 . 3/6/2012
This is really sweet.
| SP777 chapter 2 . 9/26/2011
Awww...I wish this was a multi-story.
| shie0917 chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
omg! i wanna touch him too! *drools*
| shie0917 chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeee* so sweet!
| lyra0the0white chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
I know you wrote this story a few million years back, but I decided to start reading Ichiruki fanfiction from the oldest to the most recent ones and only now did I come across yours.
I'm all giggly right now xD
you portrayed their actions in a very funny but endearing way. definitely going to my favourites! I would have loved Rukia's answer at the end though xD
| GuessWho25 chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
Aw, that was cute. One thing i did noticed was that in the first part, you seemed to build up this whole moment/feeling and then it kinda ended so soon. I'm not sure whether I like that or not. But I'm leaning more towards liking it! :)
| Needle In My Eye chapter 2 . 1/25/2010
naw... such a sweet story!
| amehoshi141 chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
Oh my gosh the ending was absolutely kawaii!
| Black Sun Upon An Icy Sky chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
The END! ! ! (blushs deeply)
| Black Sun Upon An Icy Sky chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
That was so kawai!
| NotQuiteDG chapter 2 . 5/30/2009
youre pretty good at this fluff thing
| NotQuiteDG chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
| MONST3R chapter 2 . 1/20/2009
| Avaira chapter 2 . 7/21/2008
Haha, that was cute.