|Reviews for Hidden Within|
| Bonomania chapter 5 . 8/30/2009
Um...so...you know you wanna update this! XD
| Scifinerd92 chapter 5 . 6/28/2009
WHAT? HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!
Who is Mr Roberts? What happened at the Dursleys?
Please carry on with masterpiece! You're writing is so professional D
| yumi2482 chapter 5 . 10/19/2008
| blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah chapter 5 . 4/9/2008
Please update this story! It's really good, and I want to see what happens next :P
| The pills go in your mouth chapter 5 . 8/19/2007
i just read your story, i really like it and hope you continue.
| parseltonge girl chapter 5 . 3/5/2007
did u have to leave it there
| samgurlalways chapter 5 . 2/11/2007
| harry'n'mione4ever chapter 5 . 2/10/2007
hm... interesting so far! update soon!
| Sins of the Soul chapter 4 . 2/9/2007
It's pajamas, not pyjamas. Otherwise, this is interesting.
| kizunakat chapter 5 . 2/8/2007
pretty good. cant wait for more. kizuna
| Madd Girl chapter 5 . 2/7/2007
oh. It's gettingg better every chapter!
| yaoi-fied chapter 5 . 2/7/2007
That end confused me but I'll read it again, slower next time, I'm sure I just looked over something. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| EmySabath chapter 3 . 2/6/2007
This story is unfolding really well, I'm excited to read more! I really like your characterization of Draco, and you've made me very curious about this Mr. Roberts.
One critique is that your grammar isn't very good, but a beta can help with that, and in your case it doesn't interfere with my enjoyment of the story very much at all, because the plot is so good.
Keep up the good work!
| Madd Girl chapter 4 . 2/5/2007
oh. That was a nice little twist
| yaoi-fied chapter 4 . 2/5/2007
Good chapter, I like how Voldy was teasing Harry. Please update.