|Reviews for When You Hear Me Singing You Get the Rifle Down|
| angelfire east 24 chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Wonderful and somehow very tragic at the same time. You hit all the right marks!
| Brigid Tanner chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
I'm so glad I found this story again! It was one of the first good ones I read when I got into Supernatural fan fic, but I didn't know how to save it, and then I couldn't find it again. Great details in the story, and I loved young Dean. He's gotten much better at the salt and burn over the years ; )
| sentarla chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
oh I don't know weather to laugh at the imagie or feel sorry for dean.
(and that ends my quest of reading all of your fics,)
thanks for good read!
| Thru Terry's Eyes chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
That was a good story, without going into the details I actually burned a rat once. Thing was as big as my dog. That was after I beat it to death with a frying pan. It goes downhill from there.
| OXBastetXO chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
| sams1ra chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
That was kinda sad, how messed up the kid was...
| A-blackwinged-bird chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Excellent job, my friend. Amazingly simple, haunting story.
He yanked open the medicine cabinet and stood up on his tiptoes to reach the brown bottle of peroxide and the kinked-up tube of ointment.
I love the detail here. Kinked-up tube of ointment really sells this.
Dean centered the rat's fat body in the rifle sight and squeezed the trigger smoothly, anticipating the kick of the butt against his shoulder. Darkness blossomed on the wall behind the rat, and it fell over as Sam sat up, screaming.
This is perfect, very reminescent of Nightmare. You've showed us the rat's death without showing us the rat. Congrats.
The dream had felt so real, and suddenly he knew. The rat was haunting him. Its spirit had to be angry, shot dead like that when it was trying to get food, and now it was punishing Dean.
There is a movie. I saw it long ago, but it has haunted me ever since. It is about giant rats that live in the walls, eating the family cats and attacking the children. This part of your story made me remember that movie with striking clarity and I love it.
I love seeing Dean's struggle with the rat, and with himself. I actually love rats but I sat transfixed as Dean tried again and again. Then Dad comes home and takes control, which Dean is all too happy to surrender. Thank you for making John good.
What a perfect story! I'm bookmarking this one.
| irishgirl9 chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Great story! I like the way Dean took care of Sammy! I also like that John was nice in this story! Great job!
| sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Great WEEchester story! Loved Dean's protectiveness of Sammy.
| angel679 chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Great story I can't stand rats they are just ew. I'm glad John didn't act like an ass. Poor Dean forgot the most important thing lighter fluid dude.