Reviews for Bella's War
i 3 your story chapter 22 . 3/7/2014
This is the most beautiful ending to a story i have ever read. I sould most definitly be made into a movie, it would be sooo awsome and you would have the whole world at your feet. The way you express the characters emotions and the way the discription of the events play out it absolutely the best thing I have ever read, and that is saying something. it is most definitely way better then the origional twilight series and should be published!
Thankyou sooo much for allowing me the pleasure of reading your story. Hope the best are just as good.
From Tiffany
P.S. Sorry if i sound like some fangirl, i am not! But it really was amazing!
Guest chapter 23 . 9/23/2012
I HAVE READ ALL THREE OF YOUR STORIES. THEY WERE JUST GREAT. THANK YOU THANK YOU...IT IS GREAT THAT THOSE OF YOU WHO CAN COME UP WITH STORY LINES DO SO AND SO WELL. THEN YOU TAKE THE TIME AND EFFORD TO POST THEM ON LINE FOR THOSE OF US WHO DO NOT SO WE CAN READ THEM. AGAIN THANK YOU THANK YOU...ARIZONA BLANCA LOBO
pgrabinEdward chapter 24 . 10/25/2011
Great story- I really enjoyed it! I want Twilight to keep going!
Acciofics459 chapter 23 . 11/7/2010
I read your WHOLE Bella saga in one day (if you count staying up until like 2am as one day)-that's how good it is.
Acciofics459 chapter 21 . 11/7/2010
Another crying chapter...except MUCH sadder than the other one.
Acciofics459 chapter 12 . 11/6/2010
im crying. literally. :'(
twilightgran chapter 23 . 6/9/2010
Bravo! Again! Thanks!
BookLover97 chapter 24 . 4/8/2010
loved it !
Mykelsgirl chapter 22 . 4/1/2010
OMG. i loved all three stories. they would make a damn good movie. u r extremely talented. i dont think stephenie meyer could do it better herself.
bellaedward8142 chapter 23 . 1/21/2010
that was simply amazing! i loved the last paragraph in your epilogue. VERY deep :O)
Mharry chapter 22 . 1/12/2010
Hey Storms !

so, after reading this third story, i can repeat what i said for the other two and add some more adjectivs !

AMAZING AWESOME WONDERFUL AND BREATH-TAKING FANFICTION !

I relly couldn'tmake any bad remark, and I, as everyone else out here, really really really hope (and pray P) that you will write another sequel !

If so, coul you add an author note to this fanfic, so that i am warned D

thanks again for such an entertaining story !

D
kikiharuka13666 chapter 23 . 12/4/2009
you should continue the series. i got a basic story line for you.

A vampire wants vengance against bella for somthing so he kidnapps Edward and bella has to use her powers to save him
deleteteled chapter 23 . 9/5/2009
fabulous story
deleteteled chapter 21 . 9/5/2009
i love this trilogy, you should totally continue it! what's gonna happen with charlie?
Midnitelilly chapter 22 . 8/23/2009
Your trilogy is amazing, I was so enthralled I sat at my computer all day reading without even noticing the time pass. You had wonderful ideas and a gift for using words that allowed me to feel like I was part of this journey. I love that you gave us a little bit of closure for Charlie because that was the only part of the story that I felt needed to be included. Great story, Great job and I look forward to reading more from you :)
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