Reviews for For the kids
stonerockpebble chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Nice story um u forgot qoutation marks but asides frome that nice story
Jes chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
glad you "felt that the world needed some more FordexVanessa love"
Sara Jaye chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
You need periods and commas after you finish a line of dialogue, and it was hard to read with single-apostrophe quotes. But the writing was good, and so was the characterization. And you're right, the world does need more FordexVanessa.