|Reviews for Starting to Heal|
| mecedeme chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
I like your ideas! You have a great future writing WJ fics, I think!
If I may make a suggestion, look at the first word of all your paragraphs. It is the name of a character. Try to vary your sentences, put different parts of the sentence first. (ie. Walking into her office, Jordan saw a defeated-looking Woody slumped on the couch.) When you use different structures in your sentences/paragraphs your stories have more flow and are less like a list of good ideas.
Keep on writing! :o)
| wjobsessed chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
I thought this was good.
You put alot of work into it. It's certainly a great play-by-play of all the scenes in the episode. I like some of your interpretations.
My fav line: "One shooting separated them and now 2 shootings were pulling them together."
Please post any other wj fic you have. And thanks :)