Psst! Your formatting's gone clumpy near the top of the page.

Apart from that, what a great story! I love how you've done Edgar; he's got his own quirks and personality but he's still close enough to his dad for the story to work. You've also got Lemony Snicket's style down perfectly. I'm slightly confused as to why Lady Audrey is dressed as Poison Ivy but I guess it fits the character.

Great writing. I hope Sunny, Klaus and Violet aren't really dead. You writing style is wonderfully similar to Lemony Snicket's own, and the characters are very interesting. Great story. POor Beatrice. Please update soon.

Interesting...

Doing a story concerning Beatrice is not widely done, and as such is quite unique in of itself. Anyway, the story is good, you plot interesting. The story does seem similar to aSoUE, although we can hope that the Baudelaires are not dead. In this current chapter, Beatrice's attempts to avoid the questions of her guardian are a bit weak. I mean that if I suspected my guardian of being evil, I would attempt to cover up the fact that I was spying on them. Anyway, those are my thoughts.

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Awesome chapter! *bounces in giddy excitement*

I loved the way this chapter turned out, especially with the fudge and letting a loved one die.

I also really liked the “We won’t tell”, “You shouldn’t go in there”, or “How can a plant be expected to understand English?” part. Excellent, this could be a real book!

Wow...this could actually be a Series of Unfortuneate Events book! I don't see why you have only three reviews, this is VERY good!

_ I will be waiting in anticipation...FOR MORE! MUST HAVE MORE! *richochets off walls*

Indeed, I am researching the Baudelaires' fortunes in much the same way as you, though my research is more into the emotional state of one particular Baudelaire and one particular Quagmire. If you have time to verify my stories for accuracy, I would appreciate it; however, if it stops you from updating, by all means ignore them!

You have a most absorbing style of writing. Whilst it would be incorrect to say that I enjoy reading the misfortunes of Baudelaire Snicket, I certainly appreciate the effort you put into your writing!

By the way, I continue to cling to hop, much as I would a teddy bear or a tangerine.

Brilliant! I don't understand why you have no reviews. This story is fantastic, original and most decidedly Snicket-y. I sincerely hope the Baudelaires are not actually dead, though. Hope you update soon.