|Reviews for Birthday Phone Call|
| Monday the 14th chapter 2 . 7/9/2011
| chainofcommand chapter 2 . 8/23/2009
Very good; well written with an interesting idea
| Cari chapter 2 . 5/19/2008
Not a very happy note to end on T_T
| Rat chapter 2 . 5/6/2008
You wrote this brilliantly, I love the one sided conversation Jess overhears, and the whole conversation you share with us after. Absolutely awesome, and heartbreaking too.
| girlfan1979 chapter 2 . 9/6/2007
Oh wow. You did this well, and I just love stories with Jess in them, when she's done well - and here, just a great example of the girl she might have been.
| Ivy3 chapter 2 . 8/30/2007
I liked it.
| ta1nt3d1uv chapter 2 . 7/31/2007
Love it. Brothers, heh.
| Miss502 chapter 2 . 7/25/2007
Hi! I'm a french girl, thus sorry for the faults. I love your story and your way of writing !
| MeShelly chapter 2 . 7/8/2007
Okay, my head's kind of spinning from the mad dash between "sweet" to "disaster" for the Winchester brothers. I must say, putting the complete conversation after hearing only half of it somehow compounds the hurt, because the reader *knows* that Dean can't possibly take Sam's answer well, and then the reader *actually* knows that Dean didn't take it well (this being applicable to any other feeling generated by their conversation).
"I just wish it didn't have to be this way sometimes, you know?" Very nice summation of Sam's regret. I liked how Jess wants to protect/help Sam, and her frustration at being on the outs.
I think it's cute that John wished Sam a happy birthday, and that Dean could joke about John's temperment. "Hope you get your papers in on time or whatever." Dean's evaluation of Sam's priorities, in the right light or not, was-wow-really cutting to the heart of matter without actually saying it (and I'm a major fan of understatement). Ouch...what a way to end a fic. I can't help but feel really frickin' depressed.
::cough:: Despite that part, I enjoyed reading this. The dialogue being my favorite-their speech mannerisms seem spot-on. Well done. :)
| MeShelly chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
I love the phone conversation-very sweet.
And, it's an interesting set-up for Jess: I like how her observations of the half-conversation are all tied into how she views Sam.
"Sometimes it unnerved Jess just how easy Sam found it to lie." The lie kind of took me by surprise as well-it's an intriguing idea, that Jess had already figured this out but continued to love/trust Sam anyway.
| xsilicax chapter 2 . 6/17/2007
I enjoyed this.
Good POV, great dialogue, it worked really well,
| Marvin is my Muse chapter 2 . 5/26/2007
Aw! Poor not-together boys! Loved this, it really shows how, even though they were apart, they still had their brotherly bond. Loved how it was from Jessica's persepective! Great story!
| J chapter 2 . 5/26/2007
Hey that was good!I loved the harpies thing reminded me of that sceene from the 2nd harry potter .
| unapologetic chapter 2 . 5/8/2007
That was really well-written, you did a great job of writing their conversations. It was kind of sad though...(like I should expect anything else.)
| NC Girl chapter 2 . 5/5/2007
Very clever! I really liked this! What a unique idea to do one sided phone conversations! I liked the fact that you included both sides at the end, but I really don't think it was necessary.
The first one (Sam calling Dean) had me laughing! The second one was heartbreaking. You really wrote the language for both characters extremely well. Great job!