Reviews for Dominance
Sky13r chapter 3 . 8/15/2008
YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING! THIS IS AN AWSOME STORY!
CountingPebbles chapter 3 . 5/3/2008
I hope u'll still continue this. I like it plz dont give up on it!
Hinata's sperit chapter 2 . 1/7/2008
Please don't dis Dominance So far from what I've read it's been really awsome story. I do hope you keep it up!
callmebri chapter 3 . 12/31/2007
awsome story. not often i find a good story with a couple that isnt one of my favs (ShikaTema being #1). plz continue.
MEa chapter 3 . 12/15/2007
That's it? Is the story complete? :( please, more! CANT WAIT!
Silvedry chapter 3 . 2/22/2007
Great story! I can't wait for you to write more!

But maybe you should think about a beta reader to check those errors for you.
evilkittymutatingscientist chapter 3 . 2/18/2007
Plz, write more!

secret: i luv Kiba
bezoar10 chapter 3 . 2/17/2007
great story, just remember to spell check and re-read your story more than once.
Lady Azura chapter 3 . 2/9/2007
I like this story.

However, I think you need a beta... to help you with spelling and grammar.

Other than that, though, you have something good going on. :3
evilflynmonkeys chapter 3 . 2/8/2007
great story...more please
evilflynmonkeys chapter 2 . 1/30/2007
i can't wait to see where you take this story...Kiba and Temari are two of favorites