|Reviews for Perpetual Twilight|
| AnimeObsessionFantasy chapter 15 . 1/2/2008
*shouts* Bo Bo Aizen! Boo Aizen! _
Welp, I wonder what kind of plan is in store for Ichigo :o
| SweetestChick chapter 15 . 1/2/2008
Very interesting... I wonder how Zengetsu and the 'Hollow' met up.
Hmm, Ichi/Ruki/Ishi? Never really thought about that one. Lol now I'm curious. XD
Poor Orihime. She's just so into Ichigo, and the boy only has eyes for Rukia. *hugs her*
Well, another excellent chapter. Happy New Year and keep on updating!
| TheLegalAssassin chapter 15 . 1/2/2008
OMG! What the heck is going on?
Hope you update soon...
| Rukia42gami chapter 15 . 1/2/2008
Yayy...!at last!after a long time waiting you finally make the new chapter
it's really good! can't wait for the next one
| Withdrawn chapter 15 . 1/2/2008
While I have to agree that this is basically an interlude chapter, it's definitely a very good one. Not only that, but it gets some important stuff done. First, it included that last little cliffhanger of yours with some interesting new information. Second it not only reintroduces the re-powered up Uryu, but, by doing so, it gives, me at least, the hope that Orihime will not continue along her current rather bleak path whence matters of the heart are concerned. Beyond this, I loved your scene with Rukia, that was just awesome. Also, the scene with Aizen at the end was nice, more clues, villainous plains of villainy, and, of course, another bit of foreboding for Ichigo's... let's just call... it... a rather unpleasant tenant and leave it at that. Moving rapidly along from that, I think the scene that has captured my imagination the most is not a scene that was actually in this chapter, but just my imagination of what Uryu's reaction will be to... ah... what Orihime will tell him... yeah... Anyways, I digress. The main thing is that this interlude was actually a pretty nice chapter, and I look forward to the next, whenever it may happen to arrive.
| Iana Sabelle chapter 15 . 1/1/2008
Finally! You updated! hehehe...
No... Ichigo can't be Aizen's ally! No! *sniff*
I wonder how Ishida would react from Inoue's information...
Please update soon! _
| Rukia42gami chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
Umm,hi finalyte! i'm one of your story's big fan and i just want to know if you're willing to finish this story or not?
i know you probably busy...or something got in your way...
well i just want to know because i like your story so much!
it's gonna be a shame if it didn't finish...but no pressure!
| Rukia42gami chapter 14 . 12/14/2007
aww...i'm so waiting for the next one!favoriting it!
| LavenderSkies chapter 14 . 11/25/2007
Liked the little bit about Gin and Matsumoto...nicely bittersweet. And the cliffhanger at the end about Zangetsu! Can't wait to find out what that's all about! D
| AnimeObsessionFantasy chapter 14 . 11/11/2007
woah o_o who could that be xD at first i thought it was the hollow Ichigo... hmm.. really curious.
| Joz chapter 14 . 11/11/2007
You do a good job of shifting to the other characters who are not immediately involved in the direct situation. It's very Bleach-esque even.
I have noticed that you have smooth transitions in general, and your writing style seems more mature than most of the other fanfics. The plot and character development are all going at a really great pace, and the feel of the storyline does not seem to be sacrificed or rushed in anyway. There are not moments that seem too cheesy or too excessively violent either (with all the Rukia slapping and what not). You have done a really great job about not dragging out the awkward or sappy moments and not focusing too much on anyone's ego, temper, etc. I just think that some of your implications, or rather, some things need to be more subtle and implied than said outright. Such as, the stuff between Urahura and Yurichi.
It is interesting to read this, since it feels like a plausible alternative to what really happened in the Bleach manga concerning Ichigo's hollow self.
I have to admit I am really hooked, and cannot wait for your next chapter.
| Joz chapter 7 . 11/11/2007
You are doing a really good job portraying Byaku's personality.
| sanriochica333 chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Ah really interesting start.
| Withdrawn chapter 14 . 11/11/2007
Wow... that chapter was just... overall... too awesome for words. I mean, in the beginning with Matsumoto, I loved how you described her thought process, plus I totally agree with you (or at least your Matsumoto) about Gin. I just don't think that someone as monstrous as Gin is made out to be would really be that kind to Matsumoto when they were children. After that, I loved her 'conversation' with Momo. It was just really well done, I don't know why, but something about was just... right, if that makes any sense at all. The 'concentration exercise' that Rukia used on Ichigo was also a stroke of sheer genius, not only that, but it just makes logical sense to me when I think about it. Just thinking about Ichigo's character type, and also his relationship with Rukia, it just seems so obvious (in hindsight I suppose) that it would work... Moving on, I have to say that Ichigo's thoughts on the sleeping Rukia were among the cutest lines ever. And, the final scene... that was very good like that, but I get the impression that if it had continued it would have become bone-chilling. Also, that line about Zangetsu is perfectly written. Because, for one thing, it's a massive clue, quite obviously, to the readers, but, at the same time, it really tells us almost nothing for absolute certain.
| Swift-Star9 chapter 14 . 11/10/2007
Finally! It's been months since I last read your fanfic. Anyhow, it looks good except a lot of the IchiRuki has been really annoying me. And don't beat up Orihime that much. Also, try bringing in Chad a lot more.
Oh, a really good fanfic that you should look at is Veiled Path by some author author on fanfiction. I'm sure you could learn from that author's style.