|Reviews for To Death!|
| potterrules92 chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
wow, i dont think that there's any critisism that i can possible give you! lol, i loved your poem, it was amazing! maybe to get in more rhyming? that's about all i can say. i lvoed it, awesome job!
do you think that you could drop by my story and give it a read and review? i'd really appreciate if you did. D
| Remember The Darkness chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
well contrar to your belife this was very good. a little dark but thats what i like about it.
p.s my friend now thinks your
p.s.s you should totaly submit it!
| fahzzyquill chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
this is really good. i really liked the end. if u want to draw more people in u need a stronger beginning. soemthing surpirising, strange, intriguing. and inbetween the repeptitiion and variation u might want to put more. this is really good though! the other stuff is just stuff u might want to work on. keep writing. u're doing great!