|Reviews for Fantasy Football|
| MajesticTaySlime chapter 1 . 17h
I love this! "Beating your brother - priceless" is my favorite line. Keep up the good writing!
| PirateLeia chapter 1 . 4/2
I don't usually read whump stories or long stories, but this one was satisfying and worth my while. Keep up the great work!
| Tecwyn chapter 1 . 5/8/2018
| Anjion chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
Haha, this was fun! It took me a moment to realise that this was American football (as opposed to the British football), but I soon got into the flow! Poor Charlie! But he helped to take the victory, so kudos to him. Great story!
| AinsleyWright chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
Haha I was laughing through this and cringing. Great story!
| PSW chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
Good for Charlie! And good for Colby - don't just assume Charlie's useless! Loved the bit at the end too, I knew he would just be excited to have won...
Enjoyed, thanks for writing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
Amita was bit too much (there's a special kind of word I'd like to use on her, lol), but other than that, I really liked this. Yes, men indeed, but is it truly so bad? Lol. Good story.
| Gianna di Fiori chapter 1 . 2/15/2016
I know very, very little about football, so I had to get clarification on the game. But, in all honesty, I found this immensely funny! The "Mastercard" moment at the end truly was priceless!
| Pegasus Sword Master chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
| Leonora Chris chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
haha. as bad as the ending of the "game" was, the ending of the story still made me smile.
| Viper003 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
I loved it! Haha this was great :)
Especially the last couple of lines "Beating your big brother at football -priceless."
| Cutter12 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
grooooan! I had to because of your punchline. :D
I Enjoyed reading this very much!
| sylverspyder chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I'll favorite this when I'm actually logged on, I just couldn't wait to say that I loved it.
And bitchy Amita is totally realistic. Watching the series you see she gets like that sometimes. And I can't help but smile when I imagine how crappy she'll feel when she finds out he wasn't drunk. Thanks for writing, toodles - SS
| Music Marauder chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Oh, the ending is priceless. :D Thank you for posting.
| thisaccountisinactivelosiento chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
OMJ! I frickin LOVED this! :D Hooray for Charlie one-upping Donnie! But oh dear, I wish he hadn't lost his spleen because of it... what a fun story, though. I loved all the stark yet subtle comparisons between men and women mentality in this, especially when Amita was like, "Men." Lol, so true. :)
Overall, a refreshing and funny chapter of the Brothers Eppes. You are exceptionally good at crafting oneshots with just enough humor and angsty whumpage to keep us happy. Thank you!