Reviews for The Ghost of Me
Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
If I were you, I would work a little on "show," not "tell." Even though it's sometimes annoying to have characters who know things readers don't, it's easier to keep their personalities intact that way.
Macintosh chapter 6 . 6/8/2011
Noa? That's a big stretch, because she can't be much older then Edward.

..Nice anyway.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 8 . 9/5/2010
wow. great chapter\story.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 7 . 9/5/2010
wow, thast's romantic. great chapter.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 6 . 9/5/2010
great chapter.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 5 . 9/5/2010
that's messed up. great chapter.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 4 . 9/5/2010
what a mess.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 3 . 9/5/2010
wow, that was cool. great chapter.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 2 . 9/5/2010
great chapter.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
wow, that's OOC(out of character) for ed. great start\chapter.
NekoKittenM chapter 8 . 7/30/2007
My favorite story yet. :]
Lady Rini chapter 8 . 6/14/2007
This is a good story, I felt sorry when ed had to send al away to ameria but after he did that he found love. I would like to see more chapters.
MsAnimanga chapter 8 . 5/12/2007
wa! That was painful to read! It was awesome, but i got this naggy feeling in my mind that told me i was betraying Winry! I love you Winry, i'm so so so so sorry! This was so cool, and the last chapter closed everything without being the ending which was kinda confusing but yah, it was great. thnx for the fun and giving me yet another excuse to not do my homework! _
kerapal bubbles chapter 8 . 4/7/2007
WHOA! TALK ABOUT MATURE CONTENT! geez...i think that last part made ed a little OOC...
Bar-Ohki chapter 8 . 3/8/2007
All's well that ends well. I enjoyed the story. _
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