Reviews for Secret Life
CrystalizedHeart chapter 3 . 2/12/2007
Wow, that chapter was truly moving. I really, truly love this story and have to admit that I wait in eager anticpation for the next installement to this masterpiece. I was so suprised that you are writing so many stories at the one time (I can honestly say I have no idea how you do it but it inforces the point of you being as gifted a writer as you are!) I will be sure to check out some of you other stories in the near future as I believe that even if they are as half as good as this story then they are Fantastic in my books already!

I absolutly adore how you wrote this chapter and it's contents and I agree wholely that through years of marriage with Hermione and with building the life that he has, that Draco would be like that. I love Winnie, I think that the way you write her that she is the epitomy of the word Adorable and I think that the mixture of both Draco and Hermione within her is perfect.

Enough rambling from me, great update, marvolous story and I hope that you update soon! XD

-Mel-
Roseasweet chapter 2 . 2/9/2007
Wow! You really do write the best stories! Update soon!
dragoneyes5000 chapter 2 . 2/8/2007
hey...i didn't know u started a new fic...great start..
galloping-goose chapter 2 . 2/8/2007
"Because, logically, if Draco was the child's dad and Hermione was its mum, then that had to mean..." - Wow, that harry, he doth catch on well-ly.

Kind of weird to think of Draco in sweats...lol, wanted to call him Drake there...

That's how I'm going to start answering the door: "Either come in or leave, I won't ask again," - lol, that'd be bad, because the only place I answer the door is at work...no wait, I do it at home too, sometimes...well, let's see if I remember...

It's Hermione's house, of course it's going to be uncluttered. She's kind of anal (ha ha) in ways like that.

I've always wanted my own library...in an office just like that! But mainly the library part, and I wated it to be huge...with ladders to get to the highest shelves...the kind on the rollers. Man, that is so dangerous...not that the chairs near the shelves are much safer, but...

lol...Harry deserved that answer to "when did you and Hermione meet?" Aska stupid question, get a stupid answer...

Yeah...I'm not calling her Winnie. Rowena's good for me.

His funny sidekick? I hope Ron doesn't mind being called that...I may have a few problems with that, in comparison to "the boy who saved the world." Of course, I would be the funny sidekick, but still...

LOL..these aren't them...

OH! I bet Ron is just SO pissed off! Aunty Ginny! hj - damn cat...always with her 'opinions.'

BLAISE! Ginny's with BLAISE! I like it!

"Her best friend's are my best friend's. I know this, because I have Saturday night dinner with them every week. They've been our best friends for years now." Leaning back, he stared at them impassively. "You? You're just the past she's not ready to let go of. Just like she's the past you don't think you can let go of. You think she's lost without you. Like she doesn't have family and friends. Because in Hogwarts, you two were her friends, her brothers, her confidants. But it's been eight years, she's moved on, she just never got around to telling you." - Ouch. But very, very true.

It's funny, because right after Draco accuses them of not knowing what she does each day, they say that they need to know her schedule, so they can find out WHAT SHE DOES EACH DAY. lol... oh the irony.

Yes! Sesame Street!

So organized! Holy crap! I could never do that! He really does know her days though, so ha ha in Harry and Ron's faces!

wow, she even has old guy tail after her...!

BAH! I was like, who the hell are Bill and Liz? But I figured it out. I got it, I GOT IT...no need to panic...

Weekdays don't need an apostrophe before the 's.' So it can be just saturdays...etc...

Damn, I was hoping Lucius was dead!

Can't imagine Hermione wearing lingerie, lol...though it's probably best not to imagine that...

If Hermione's baby's a boy (which I hope it is), what are they going to call it? Zod? Please?

Hey, at least it's a Siberian Husky, and not a giant spider!

oh, never mind, apparently the giant spider's in the attic, lol. And a dragon in the backyard. Do these people swing with Hagrid or what? and oh yes, I certainly meant 'swing,' lol! *winks*

Damn kids, ruining their father's lying and mean-ness. Damn them all! I'll shank her! Just give me the call, I swear I'll do it!

Good, Crookshanks. About time I heard about her! Don't worry though, I'll ask about her in just a few more chapters. Man, I'm obsessed. I'd call my own cat Crookshanks, but I have a better name. Berk. It's far nicer, and not as dirty.

Well, as long as you know when the saying's supposed to be said, nothing else matters, right? It costs an arm and a leg. See? That was bad timing.

I don't want to imply that I'm in any way better than Harry or Ron, but I'd notice if my best friend were pregnant or married!

Good. glad to get Draco's POV next, I enjoy reading it more!
quiet-mg chapter 2 . 2/7/2007
A very wonderfully written story so far. Not only is the story adictive from the first instance, it is also very easy to read and easy to picture and feel what is happening. I really want to know what happened to Hermione.. I love the gentlness and heart warming you put into the moments between Draco and Winnie as well as the memories of Hermione with them. I will defenately be sticking with this story till the end, seeing the whole progress of their search and where you end up taking this story. On that note, I hope you update soon. Thanks.
Sam's Firefly chapter 2 . 2/6/2007
Oh my gosh. You had me hooked the moment I read the summary. This is very unique and original. I LOVE Ron's character! He is so funny. You write every character exactly how I can imagine they'd be. You don't change very much from the original, but yet it's so different. Especially with Malfoy. It's like there's something different, yet it's the same old Malfoy.
Toxxic-hugs chapter 2 . 2/6/2007
Ha, I loved-The Twilight Zone, Ron. I think we've just entered the Twilight Zone. Harry and Ron seriously must be oblivious of Hermione's other life, I mean-Nearly all of Ron's family knows, and yet he's in shock? Winnie is too darling. Draco seems so in character, and yet different because he's expected muggle living, and loves a muggle born. Wonderful chapter, please update soon!
starrlightt chapter 2 . 2/6/2007
can't wait for the next chapter! i'm already hooked on the second chapter!
bethygirl94 chapter 2 . 2/6/2007
This chapter certainly answered quite a few questions but I think its sad if such best friends could grow so apart that they now know nothing about her life. You could almost feel Draco's emotions talking about the woman he loves. I also enjoyed the way Winnie tells her father off "mummy wouldn't let Buck do that". I feel sorry for Harry though as he thought he knew Hermione. Can't wait for Draco's p.o.v.
love2read2much chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
hey it's me again with one of my long reviews...and thanks that i was one of the best commenters for last chapter. This chapter was in Harry's pov right, just going to check, yes it was. I love hearing Draco's POV, but just the emotions that you let Draco posess when Harry asked a question, and the best ones was when he was with Winnie, i think they just made him feel more human (even though he is a wizard) than JKR makes him feel. He still has the cold relationship with Potter and Weasley, which i like because for some reason i hate the stories that make them all friends without giving them back stories (your story BIT is a prime exapmle on how you started to make them friends, they had a backstory) so when you wrote how Draco said:

"You don't know her! You know Hermione Granger, the know-it-all from Hogwarts. You don't know Hermione Malfoy; the mother, the wife, the Healer, the Rights Activist. Hell, I bet you guys don't even know what Laws she's been working on. I bet you have no idea what she does when you're not around, or even who her real best friends are. You've probably never even wondered," that was a line that made me really think, was this how it would be like in the future? and i think just the format and how you built up to that sentence...ahh i just love this fic, usually it takes me forever to get into a fic, but this one just had me from the start.

Another few things i loved about this chapter where when Draco was telling Hermione's schedule, that made me want to cry, i swear you made him sound so in love with her without it feeling like a cliche, i really really really really hate cliche's because they are just so obvious. And the way that it rolled off the tongue like it was nothing at all, it just gah made me swarm with happiness and love!

"Would you like to know anything else? How she takes her coffee? How often she visits the ladies room? Maybe how many times we shag a week?" I would pay loads of money to see Ron's face when Draco said that, just seeing it go to the hot colour of red and flame like a tomato, and then all the lines associated with that...

"Fine, but stay out of our bedroom," he said, seriously. "Last thing I want is Weasley fingering her night gowns, using it as a later thought for his one handed night ritual," yes... hm awkward but loveable. I don't really write comments this long so you should feel very special. And i have never seen a cuter daddy/daughter moment from the one with Draco/Winnie/Lion that was so adorable...guh Draco is all types of yumminess...

Trust me now, i am waiting for that ORANGE flash to be on my review page...i'll be waiting...i shall go off and finish BIT all your stories are fabulous.

-Rachel
Ghedea chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
Again, another wonderful chapter! I absolutely love your stories! Each individual story as me waiting patiently, or not so patiently, for the next chapter. I hang on each word. And I must add, I bounce quite often when an alert (added chapter or story) pops into my e-mail and I find out that it is yours. Keep up the wonderful, beautiful work! I assure you, I will be waiting for the next, and the one after that...as well as the one after that! Till next time, take care, be safe, and again...beautifully done! - Ange (perfectedhell)
spadul chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
This is such a great story so far, very promising indeed. It has such a wonderful plot and I'm anxious to know what will happen next (and that's always a good sign, is it not?). Keep up the great work!

-classicjs
Aperira chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
Wow... this is amazing... I LOVE how you portrayed Malfoy. I can't wait for the next chapter. I think that Lucius... kidnapped Hermione...
arabella91 chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
By far one of the best stories I've read in awhile! The characters were very well devoloped and... They were in character! That's always a huge ! lmao. We get to see Malfoy in a very dynamic way. His love for family and his hostile towards his father, Harry, and Ron. It's still him but you made him 3 dimensional. And that is lacking in alot of stories. I kept saying to myself that this should be a movie. Parts of it are very funny. Especially the Twilight Zone bit. LMAO! Can't wait for more. PLZ update soon. LOVED IT!
Jex chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
The mystery and suspense is terric. The plot is original and your writing style is one of the best. And I don't even think I need to comment on the characterization. Well done. Hope to read some more soon.
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