Reviews for When Rude met Reno |
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Whyntir chapter 14 . 5/8/2010 Hahahaha! I love you. IDK if U remember me. Scaring Memories? I haven't been reading this for EVA! I am SOOOOOOOO SORRY! But your chapters have gotten so long! I LOVE YOU! I havent seen a story that could keep me amused this long since Stability! While NR is quitting the story (I guess since its been WELL over a year), I am tracking this one like a hound on a coon! Is it just me, or do I sense some "IN DEPTH" interest. ;P Love you and hope to hear from you soon! (I may return to my original name) |
kichikoneko chapter 14 . 4/24/2010 Oh my gawsh! I loved this chapter to pieces! Actually I usually read one of these chapters in a few sittings, but this one I couldn't break away from and I read it all at once... And am now officially two hours late for walking my dog! (I will do that now before it gets dark) I laughed so hard especially when the shoe said "Ouch"... Well, it was Reno, but hey it was funny! I loved the more humorous tone in this chapter. Dare I say it, this story is the greatest! Well worth the wait I assure you... But now my curiosity and interest is back up at full peak. Will be waiting for the next chapter, see you then~ |
infinityinmirrors chapter 14 . 4/16/2010 This chapter was SO GOOD! There was so much Reno Rude interaction! Yay! Mygod i love Reno so much! I cant wait until we find out all those dirty secrets he seems to be hiding! Thank you so much for such a great chapter! It must take a lot of hard work! Please keep it up, i'm loving every sentence you write XD |
chibi heishi chapter 14 . 4/16/2010 I don't know about 'jumpy' exactly. The tone of it does seem a little off compared to the rest of your story, but as I can't put a finger on WHY, I really can't complain. Besides, it was still good. The 'ouch' and Reno unfolding himself from under Rude's bed was a particular highlight, although the tunnel scene was well done enough to be pleasantly creepy. And of course, I'm still unbearably curious about Reno - not to mention why everyone (except Tseng) seems to think he should be avoided. |
MinnieMouse8990 chapter 13 . 3/21/2010 I don't know why this story doesn't have more reviews. It's friggin awesome. There should be more Reno/Rude friendship fics but there aren't many. I really really fancy this one. The chapters are long and detailed, the interactions are funny and entertaining, and the story is very well though out. I love Reno in this. I really expected Reno to request Rude as his partner, especially since Rude almost defeated him, but I guess he doesn't want a partner yet. Is he a minor btw? |
Charlie O chapter 13 . 1/24/2010 I don't think I've ever reviewed for this story before so let me just take this chance to say how much I love it. Really, I just can't get enough of it. And as for this chapter the only real problem I saw that couldn't easily be overlooked was that somewhere in the beginning of the chapter (around where Rude visits the gym I think it was) the story switches from past tense to present tense. And then switches back a bit later and stays in past tense for the rest of the story. Besides that the rest of the story was great and if you're ever looking for a beta for this story I wouldn't hesitate to offer. :3 |
kichikoneko chapter 13 . 1/18/2010 I did enjoy this chapter very much, though Rude being paired up with Marco was unexpected... I figured through the whole thing that Reno was going to be Rude's partner, but I guess the inevitable that I thought of was wrong after all _; You really are good at writing despite the few mistakes (compared to the amount of writing at least). I don't mean to seem presumptuous when I say this, but I know when I edit my works I seem to miss a bunch of things as well, so I also have someone else check for spelling errors and such. I feel when I edit my writings I seem to breeze by them because I don't like to "re-read" my own things _; and I also have a hard time focusing on it. Just something to think about if you want to. Can't wait for the next one _~ |
Nadie chapter 13 . 1/8/2010 I didn't think your spelling was all that bad, but I did come across quite a few missing commas and such. Also, there were some parts where you used a different word than what you meant to, such as shallow instead of swallow. These could be a bit confusing, but I could usually figure out what it was supposed to be. Despite that, I still think this is a very good story, and while there wasn't much action in this chapter, I didn't find it boring at all. Maybe you should look into getting a friend to proof read it as well before posting it to catch any last mistakes. And I can't wait for the next chapter! I love Reno and his bouncy balls! |
rogue solus chapter 13 . 1/8/2010 NO not with that piece of dung! Poor Rude, hime and Marko just don't fit at all. I really wanted him to be put with Reno right away, but this does make for some interseting scenes to come. But come on, why can't they see that Reno and Rude are just meant to be? Can't wait till the next chapter! |
chibi heishi chapter 13 . 1/7/2010 Awesome - and I can't wait to see how Rude and Marko work together (or don't, more likely). And poor Reno, locked in and risked missing the ceremony. Hopefully Marko's arrogance will bring him down in a way that WON'T hurt Rude. |
infinityinmirrors chapter 13 . 1/6/2010 So happy to see the update notice in my inbox D The chapter didn't disappoint either! I love the way Reno and Rude interact with each other! Its just so perfectly awesome! The introduction of Rufus into the mix was well timed as well. Ah just thinking of the numerous paths this story could take makes me so happy! You've done a great job thank you so much! Keep up the great work! |
Asplar chapter 13 . 1/6/2010 I just loved this chapter it was quite amusing. Poor Rude to get stuck whit Marko I didnt see that pairing coming. And seeing Rufus getting introduced was intresting. Thank you for your hard work and keep upp the good job. :) |
kichikoneko chapter 12 . 1/1/2010 I have to start out by saying that I have just recently found this story, but love and enjoy reading it very much. I would like to congratulate on how far you've come with your writing since you first starting this story (even if you still have some grammar/spelling problems I was able to easily figure out what you meant). Also I hope you can find some free time in which to continue writing this. Good luck with your University _ |
Nadie chapter 12 . 12/29/2009 I just read through this entire fanfic in a day. I absolutely love it! I wish people could take breaks from school to write fanfics, then everything would be updated so much quicker. The whole things amazing though, and I absolutely love Reno! Please update soon! |
Light In The Void chapter 12 . 12/13/2009 Wow! When I first clicked on this, I was expecting the typical background story like the hundreds already on here ... but I was wrong! This story is different in so many ways and just plain awesome XD Your attention to detail is just perfect, especially in the fight scenes *always has trouble writing them herself* and I think you really add another dimension to Rude's character that I've never seen before. You've got Red(lol)'s character pretty much down pat too ... Gr I really wanna get Scarlet for what she did! () Well ... there's so much awesome stuff here that I would love to say more, but unfortunately my brain's shut down on me and I can't think of anything orz However, I really love this story, so please update it soon! (o)/ (Completely off-topic: good luck with university! _) |