This rocks...can't wait for more.

There's more right? DX

WHA! PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER! IT'S BEEN FOREVER AND I FEEL BORED! WHA! PUT UP ANOTHER CHAPTER! I'LL THROW A FIT! *starts kicking and throws self on ground, kicking, punching, and screaming*

I WANT RENO!

((Jk. ;) XD ))

Oh, that can't be good. I have a feeling that Lyon just got an order to cut loose on poor Rude. And WTH is going on with Reno? You've got me all worried about him. This is a very well written, very detailed and believable story, and I'll eagerly await the next chapter.

I hope this gets updated, I know your busy, but I still can't wait! At the begining you said this isn't corrected yet, but the only mistake I see is that it says Reno instead of Red. There arn't many stories about Reno and/or Rude's begining (at least, not that I can find) and out of the one's I can find, this is one of the better ones! I'm putting this on my alert list!

GAH you're using Kyo from Fruits Basket, right? AH and Arisa? AHAUAGHAHH Sorry but that excites me

Heh, so you've finally updated? Honestly, this had more grammer mistakes in it than usual as you pointed out. What the hell am I saying? You are one of the select few people on here who's stories have actually helped ta better my writing! I've been following this story since forever! And I hope ta learn from this ta better my stories, ecspecially fight scenes! I hope ya continue ta update-I really was dissapointed for a bit there, thought ya'd dropped this story. Ah, well, keep it up! Since you've updated now I'll be prowling through habitually for more updates! xD

wo YES! its here, muahahaha! i thought I was hallucinating when i saw the date for the recent update. i was like OMG ITS FINALLY HERE! YES!

anyway, loved the battles xD while yes I do agree that they weren't the same quality as yur other chapters, it was very satisfying indeed, :) Reno's totally awesome, and it was amazing that he won those battles even those he was injured like that, and that ankle... ouch

its too bad i couldn't see the battles in Reno's point of view, im really curious to see how he could move so freely like that... that and i'd love to see his reaction to everybody's expression after his secret was revealed xD. well at least, the second-biggest one

anymoo, awesome. totally awesome. i thank you from the bottom of mah heart that you updated :D and i hope yur reviews soar past the triple digits

- green tea ftw

Hey!

I cant remember if I reviewed this story before or not, but seriously this chapter was among the best. I loved the fighting, I loved the whispering and wondering about Red, and the fact that nobody is actually sure that he is a Turk afterall. I was worried even that you would launch him into another fight! ;)

So it was wonderful, and as for mistakes I have seen none so they cant be that important D

update soon! I really want to know if Rude is going to be heavily defeated or if his confidence is the right one!

Ooh, awesome update! _

love it. thanks for updating

omg u updated! this was the first good story i read you just made my night ty :)

oh god im dying

forget improving, its perfect

I JUST WANT MORE!

im so so so happy you updated

Thakyou :o)

You definitely made my day

i think i scared my friends (i was at school) with how excited i was when i found out you updated

Keep up the good work

Wow...it's amazing how much your story ROCKS!

You make all of these reasons, giving tons of excuses, and apolagies for this that and the other...and then you write this amazing chapter.

O_O

THAT'S JUST NOT FAIR! IF THIS IS BAD QUALITY WORK FOR YOU I'M QUITTING AS A WRITER RIGHT NOW!

Good job! Keep up the hard work, and take your time with it. Good luck with University choices!

Wow, very good chapter. I am excited for the next. I want to know how Rude gets him. -giggles- I love the feel of action you are able to capture with your writing style. Keep up the good work.