Reviews for To feel Safe Again
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 11/14
Keep up the good work
DreamsAreCrimson chapter 12 . 8/20/2014
This is ridiculous. The chapters are rushed, everyone is out of character (yes, I do realize this is an Alternate Universe story), there are way too many grammatical mistakes, and you have the characters tell us instead of show us. There is little to no suspense because we already know everything as soon as you introduce a new topic. I'm sorry to say I will not be continuing this story.

And before anyone criticizes me, I have already tried to read The Dementor's Bite. I will not be reading the author's third story.
kayleigh chapter 34 . 1/21/2013
You have some really amazing ideas in this story, but personally the chapters were too rushed, it looked like a first draft. If you read over your work and make notes on what you can improve on in the plot and the dialogue. Also I think you need to do a lot more character study to prevent it from being to put of character. But other than that the concepts are great.
Professor Severus Snape's Wife chapter 9 . 1/9/2013
lostmariner4803 chapter 19 . 12/26/2012
Harry potter is very disrespectful... Ungrateful bastered. Your story has such a disturbing character behavior. you made hermione too weak...
Cat130 chapter 34 . 9/16/2012
Loved it
Kilataia chapter 34 . 4/20/2012
Love the story! Really, really good :) I like how you picture Severus :)
BellaTallin chapter 6 . 4/5/2012
I'm sorry but I just can't read anymore. This had way too many mistakes, seriously needs a beta and really just needs to be rewritten. It's not realistic at all. There's no way Hermione would just let her husband beat her at all, she's more fierce then that and the other characters aren't acting like themselves at all. Nice try, but better luck next time.
purefaith91 chapter 11 . 8/19/2011
How in the world could they stand out there and listen to Hermione and Rose being beaten like that? They had proof that he was abusing without her telling them. Really want to see him get his. p
purefaith91 chapter 6 . 8/19/2011
Oh, that breaks my heart for him. I wonder if Hermione also has scars that show or if hers are only the kind that do not show. Rose already saw him and she does not care. Why is she so strong? Very interesting. p
purefaith91 chapter 2 . 8/19/2011
My hero! I love Severus and wasn't it fortunate that he was there? The end of the chapter put a knot in my stomach. Excellent so far. I truly hope that there is a chapter dedicated to SS beating the crap out of Daren (or Man since he is so fond of depersonalizing others). What a jerk. p
Izzycullen6 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
kathyjo chapter 10 . 2/18/2011
Hey..wanted to just say this story has potential but i can read any further there is just NO way sev would have not gone down and internved,,if not when darrn had hermoine but when he grabbed way would he have stood by..but good try on story..if you ever decide to may wnat to consider this chap and either change it or drop it...
Trekkie chapter 34 . 1/4/2011
Great story... However... I hate to be a nitpicker but... with all the fucked up stuff Daren was doing (rape, child abuse, dark magic, plotting evil deeds etc)... Couldnt the Aurors have just arrested him much earlier? It doesnt make sense that they were so powerless to act against him
bombingjamie chapter 4 . 8/5/2010
Is Hermiones' married name a coincidence or did you plan it?
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