Reviews for The Perils of Shopping
Walter Kovacs chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Nice little vignette you have here. Brief, but still amusing. The exchange at the beginning was the highlight of the fic. You've got a decent ear for dialogue, something that is unfortunately rare in fanfiction.

Decent descriptions of the fight between Free Spirit and The Muddler (is he an original creation?), hampered mainly by the fact that we have to read it and not see it. The way Cathy keeps bringing up Captain America is a nice touch - as both a rookie and as someone trained by him, she would naturally think 'what would Cap do?' in combat situations. Good work.