|Reviews for The Unexpected Rookie|
| AlxkendBlader chapter 2 . 12/21/2008
| HotRodimus chapter 7 . 11/9/2008
Nice, I had never heard of a cars TF crossover, I hope you do more of those.
| Ksiezniczka chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
I read this in one sitting the other day and favourited it, but gosh darn it all, I forgot to review! Stupid me! And you did so well too. Not an unexpected crossover, but not one I expected to be any good either, let alone this wonderful! (Plus the almost complete lack of grammar/spelling errors is a BIG PLUS - too many authors on this site seem to forget that most typing programs have spellcheck...) TC and Warp fighting over binoculars was priceless, the subtle jab at the movie designs were clever, the perfect characterisation of Hot Rod (and all the others) floored me, and the proposal in the end was seriously too cute.
Well, I'd say more, but this is getting awfully long, isn't it? Great job!
| crystalshifter chapter 7 . 3/7/2008
that...was utterly brilliant
| SylverMage chapter 7 . 2/24/2008
Transformers/Cars crossover FOR THE WIN. Seriously, the concept was enough for me to give it a look. But your delightfully in-character writing, lack of spelling errors, and overall wonderful weaving of words (woo, alliteration!) made this story a joy to read. I absolutely loved it, and give my thanks to your brother for suggesting you continue past the initial three chapters!
I have an extra fondness for Hot Rod, so I really enjoyed seeing him in this story, and performing well. His relationship with McQueen was fun to read. And the twins were hilarious. I can only imagine what they'd be like pumped full of high grade...
Great story I hope to find more of your expeditions into the Transformers universe!
(...and the flame paint job on Prime isn't *that* bad ;) The idea of Bumblebee with flames somehow scares me more.)
| Younger Than the Soul chapter 6 . 2/23/2008
Is this a shortened version of the on DA or what?
| ArmoredSoul chapter 7 . 2/6/2008
I love this fic...
| ArmoredSoul chapter 6 . 2/6/2008
*insert happy dance here*
| ArmoredSoul chapter 5 . 2/6/2008
Something funny enough it actually got Prowl laughing!
| ArmoredSoul chapter 4 . 2/6/2008
Swoop like car!
*begins giggling uncontrollably*
| ArmoredSoul chapter 3 . 2/6/2008
I love this story!
Especially the bit with Mater all "Git 'r done!"
| ArmoredSoul chapter 2 . 2/6/2008
Cars and Autobots working together!
Fangirls dream come true over here!
| ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
I hope the Decepticons don't get all...
But then, they're Decepticons.
| Yami-Yugi3 chapter 7 . 12/22/2007
Hmm Me like. _
| Philip Gipson chapter 7 . 12/2/2007
This tale totally burned rubber! Thanks for posting this! Although this is said to take place before "Transformers: The Animated Movie," I myself tend to think it exists in another universe. You handled all the characters very well, including Lightning McQueen and Hot Rod. Great song choice for Jazz and Hound and great job using Optimus Prime's tech-spec motto. In fact, I think the Generation 1 Transformers remain true to form, like Bluestreak talking incessently and inanely. Congrats to your little brother and Roseprincess1 for helping you out. I hope you'll come out with a sequel to this, but only if it does its own thing. To quote the Canadian band Spectre General's song "Nothin's Gonna Stand in Our Way," you got the passion and the pride.