|Reviews for The Unexpected Rookie|
| Frog1 chapter 3 . 2/6/2007
Very good, can't wait to read the next chapter! It seems like Prime has a parental interest in Hot Rod, does he in some way know that he is the next Prime?
| Chick Hicks Most Loyal Fan chapter 2 . 2/4/2007
Hi, it's me, Buick Regal Racecar 86 again. Anyways, I'm promising I'll review every chapter of this, no matter what happens. And when I promise something, I mean it. No matter what. You can ask Life Is A Highway66. Nice chapter, can't wait till next one!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Wow! Back with a Cars story, huh? By the way, this is the same author who asked if she could use your characters for a story. Remember that? Also the same author of Beyond The Stars? Anyways, if you don't remember, I just want you to know that Cars is my new favorite thing, and while I don't like Transformers much, I'm going to read this! Anyways, Chick is my favorite racer, and I don't care if he ain't real, I'm staying loyal to my favorite. Yeah, a little on the crazy side, but I was this way with Boba Fett, too. Anyways, great story!
| Prime Revolver chapter 2 . 2/4/2007
The secerets out and of course chaos follows in these kinda situations. gota love chaos.
anyway love it and go McQueen takeing charge.
*waits for ch3*
| Hellsfirescythe chapter 2 . 2/4/2007
Ah yes! I just watched the 'Cars' movie last night and I do say, I enjoyed it immensely. Any movie that can have me go from greatly disliking the main character to sympathizing with him to liking him quite a bit has my vote behind it!
Well, now that things make a little more sense in context to the movie, I'm having a better time understanding the Cars characters. *hugs Guido, he's so cute!*.
But great job! I enjoyed this chapter. The giant tranforming robots aliens from outer space have revealed themselves! *pokes at Starscream*
Lighting's 'matureness' from the end of the movie really shows now. btw: nice use of his lucky sticker _-
PS: I think you should see TF:TM. It's a good movie despite and character deaths and at times strange soundtrack transitions. *hugs dead Autobots*
| The-Charcoal-Alchemist chapter 2 . 2/4/2007
T: Oo What's Lightning planing?
Hot Rod: If we knew THAT the chapter wouldn't be a cliffhanger, now would it?
T: ... Dang technicallities!
Hot Rod: *snort/giggle*
T: I am in love with this fic! Chapter 3 soon please!
| J chapter 2 . 2/4/2007
what Lady Starscream said regarding the characters and imagination. -nod nod-
seaweed-blend organic fuel? hm... at least it ain't corn-based. ;D that'd be a good waste. "army surplus", eh? good. coupled with Wheeljack's presence, i can already imagine the big booms coming up. X3
| Lady Starscream chapter 2 . 2/3/2007
*Squees* I loved the cars movie, but this is SO much better! and you kept everyone in character, too! even the cars characters! I must say it takes a *lot* of imagination to write something like this, and you have done it very well!
I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
| lotus-genie chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
It would be funny if Doc met Ratchet. Keep on writing!
| SithSnoopy chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I like it. :)
You write so well...
| J chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Rod Witwicky! -LOL- "room full of mutants"... X3 they have NO idea.
makes me wonder if this Guido is from the movie (haven't watched it yet) or referencing to one of TF's most kickbutt and current comic artist. or a joke of both.
Sunny would be complaining half the time if he's on the tracks. the grass, the oil, if wall grinding ever occurs... XD at least he and Siders got to prank the racer who everyone loves to hate.
kaeae did a "pixar cars style autobots" over at deviantART.
you might want to switch the "Break..." with the measure lines or something else. hyphens or asterisks spaced out works and looks a little more pleasant.
bring it on!
| Prime Revolver chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Mixing TF with Cars is awsome. My fav series with an awsome movie. Its so detailed not only with discribing the going on's but with the peronalites. Their isn't much more that I can say but that I cant wait for more!
| chitoryu12 chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I see that Cars DVD you got for Christmas was quite inspiring.
| Merklin chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Love it. It's good, but then, I haven't seen anything of yours yet that wasn't. Your writing style is good, and you're doing a good job of blending Cars and Transformers together. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Hellsfirescythe chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Oh. Oh oh.
I saw the alert for this in my inbox and had the hardest time digesting it. First reaction: wha? Then it came to OMG Kenya wrote a TF fic! Kenya wrote a TF fic! *squee* Okay, yeah, I was a little strange at 5 am in the morning, but hey. It's an exciting thing to see one of one's fav authors write in a fav fandom.
I really need to sit down and watch 'Cars' now don't I? Never have seen it, but it looks interesting. I really can't wait for more chapters to come out. Oh and btw. I thought you might be interested in this: w. deviantart deviation/43170597/ found it on DA