Reviews for The Hero’s betrayal
Verhullte chapter 7 . 7/21
Fighting, nope ibiki-san. This is a slaughter. I just pictured that and thought it was great.
BIGBoy69 chapter 17 . 5/8
I hope you come back and finish this!
darkshadow1987 chapter 12 . 4/15
bloodina chapter 7 . 3/30
I just had a fangasm when he called sakura a bitch omfg.
imnotraven16 chapter 17 . 2/16
awesome chapter
thebestoftherest chapter 17 . 12/12/2015
Good story please continue I want to see where it going.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
kukuku if i was naruto i would've left konoha when he was still a civilian because then no one could stop him because he's not a ninja.
Johnny Fox chapter 17 . 11/27/2015
Hey! Where is the author anyway? Where is chapter 18?
The Demonic WereWolf King chapter 17 . 8/12/2015
what is with this cliffhanger it has been nearly 8 years since your last update, please bring the next chapter soon. And a few times I expected for there to be a couple of lemon bits with naruto and tayuya.
oyinsco chapter 17 . 6/2/2015
Cool story
Guest chapter 17 . 4/30/2015
oh please the next chapter please if you not abandoning this story please the next chapter
ShadowSlayer0 chapter 7 . 4/11/2015
I stopped reading when Naruto kicked Konohamaru.
hinata1710 chapter 3 . 2/5/2015
I swear beside that "Kukuku..." laugh of Orochimaru, he is too good to be true :3
Guest chapter 17 . 7/22/2014
I have chosen to review on the latest chappie and I am happy with everything! The first fic I read about Naruto killing the useless pink howler monkey...
Fanfic fan chapter 8 . 7/8/2014
How could a civilian child be a ninja let alone defeat naruto?
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