| Reviews for The girl he could never have |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2014 One pizza for four teenagers? I would starve! |
 GeminiLady21 chapter 1 . 4/12/2013 Man oh man this is a huge REJECTION for Dark. Or should i say 'Dork.' *laughs* Anyway this is good, though I wish that you put Satoshi more in character. |
| samanthatm chapter 10 . 12/24/2012 cute. |
| alexandra101 chapter 9 . 5/13/2011 I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! |
| alexandra101 chapter 2 . 3/26/2011 AWESOME! |
| alexandra101 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011 cool |
| alexandra101 chapter 10 . 1/26/2011 AWESOME! |
| fictionalcharacterwish chapter 10 . 5/21/2010 great story so far! please continue. :) |
| Ai Star chapter 10 . 3/19/2010 cool! this is great! well done so far so good! - keep up the good work! update soon! W |
| Stormshadow13 chapter 10 . 1/21/2008 All Right! What a kick ass story! This is great! Oh, oh, I can't wait to se dark's reaction as well as Creepy Stepdad. And also see what Krad now looks like. I REALLY, REALLY hope that you are going to write more. |
| Stormshadow13 chapter 4 . 1/21/2008 Hahahahaha! I usually don't review in the middle of a story but this time I have too. Hahahahahaha! OH, MY, GOD! Hahahahahahahahaha! I really like Dark's new nickname,Phantom Dork. but the best part is... Hahahahahahahaha! ("Eh? You mean to say that the Homicidal Blond has a crush on a GIRL? Bite me, you blue-haired brat!) THAT'S GREAT! Hahahahahahahahahaha! rolls around on floor holding sides. Hahahaha! Good thing I just cleaned. Hahahaha! Well I'm off to read more. GREAT! |
| Random Anonymous chapter 10 . 8/27/2007 this story's so awesome and so funny update soon and keep it up U ROCK! |
| SorceressDamia chapter 6 . 7/2/2007 Okay...first off, I want to say that you write excellently. You have excellent grammar, punctuation, and spelling. But I just want to say that this story is VERY OOC. I mean, okay, she gets on Krad's good side, beliveable, I suppose. But...I don't understand her power. Gaara's sand attacks and Clow Cards? So she can pretty much copy attacks in anime? If that's the case, it sounds Mary-sueish. Your character by herself is not. Her power kind of is. Perhaps give her different power. Please don't take this as a flame, because it's not. Your story is otherwise really good. |
| nautikitti chapter 10 . 5/6/2007 wicked funni |
| Star of ages 14 chapter 1 . 3/3/2007 I loved that chapter I laughed REALY hard at the stuffed turkey one and the others so please keep up the good work! |