|Reviews for The girl he could never have|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
One pizza for four teenagers? I would starve!
| GeminiLady21 chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
Man oh man this is a huge REJECTION for Dark. Or should i say 'Dork.' *laughs* Anyway this is good, though I wish that you put Satoshi more in character.
| samanthatm chapter 10 . 12/24/2012
| alexandra101 chapter 9 . 5/13/2011
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
| alexandra101 chapter 2 . 3/26/2011
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| fictionalcharacterwish chapter 10 . 5/21/2010
great story so far! please continue. :)
| Ai Star chapter 10 . 3/19/2010
cool! this is great! well done so far so good! - keep up the good work! update soon! W
| Stormshadow13 chapter 10 . 1/21/2008
All Right! What a kick ass story! This is great!
Oh, oh, I can't wait to se dark's reaction as well as Creepy Stepdad. And also see what Krad now looks like.
I REALLY, REALLY hope that you are going to write more.
| Stormshadow13 chapter 4 . 1/21/2008
Hahahahaha! I usually don't review in the middle of a story but this time I have too. Hahahahahaha! OH, MY, GOD! Hahahahahahahahaha!
I really like Dark's new nickname,Phantom Dork. but the best part is... Hahahahahahahaha!
("Eh? You mean to say that the Homicidal Blond has a crush on a GIRL?
Bite me, you blue-haired brat!)
THAT'S GREAT! Hahahahahahahahahaha! rolls around on floor holding sides. Hahahaha! Good thing I just cleaned. Hahahaha!
Well I'm off to read more.
| Random Anonymous chapter 10 . 8/27/2007
this story's so awesome and so funny
update soon and keep it up
| SorceressDamia chapter 6 . 7/2/2007
Okay...first off, I want to say that you write excellently. You have excellent grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
But I just want to say that this story is VERY OOC. I mean, okay, she gets on Krad's good side, beliveable, I suppose. But...I don't understand her power. Gaara's sand attacks and Clow Cards? So she can pretty much copy attacks in anime? If that's the case, it sounds Mary-sueish. Your character by herself is not. Her power kind of is. Perhaps give her different power.
Please don't take this as a flame, because it's not. Your story is otherwise really good.
| nautikitti chapter 10 . 5/6/2007
| Star of ages 14 chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
I loved that chapter I laughed REALY hard at the stuffed turkey one and the others so please keep up the good work!