|Reviews for Untitled|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Or else I will be at you house with a sword and a shovel and ready to make a grave!
...I'm going to Bury the sword
| AlchemyFreak0218 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
ummm...how about this for a name...Curious Fear?...better than Untitled right? Anyway...freakin Awesome! Ed-o is so cute when he's scared and unexpirienced!
| Spamsterlady chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
other than the utter ooc-ness of ed, it was a good plotline! w
| kathy lee skyler chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
AWESOME! You should make a rape one one! (i'm such a perv)
| Subo-chan chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME! XD i love it so much! RoyxEd are an awesome pair! i liked how you made Edward unsure of what to do and had Roy do all the work! oo it made me happy!
rating: 5 out of 5
thanks for uploading! keep it up!
| HoshiToTsuki chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
Haha, poor Edward! That was a very good story. Written very, very, very well. I knew he would bite Roy's shoulder at some point! It's just like Roy to accuse him of worse pain! LOL, great story!
| Fawnn chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
This was reealy good. The sex scene was a bit hasteful towards the end, but I liked it anyways :D
| PinkHairNightmare chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
| NonPerfect-Child chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
XD i shall call it "damn colonel"! ... idk... loved the story though!
| death to all humans chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
good story...there are raraely good ones these days
| KaeKaeBeaux chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
lucky Al didn't actually walk IN on them...poor boy'd be scarred 4 life lol -thumbs up-
| Alliecard chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
YAY1 I love EdxRoy! And that was a very discriptave writting sturucture. ((I can't wirte))
| TheSlashingQueen chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
That was totally awsome god you can't believe how great you are I thank you oh mighty one for having such great ideas as this fanfic I love Roy/Ed so much thier like the greatest pairing if you would like to add me on hotmail I think we'd be great friends
| maryjaneleaf chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
That was pretty good, but you could have done more with the forplay. Not that I mind the way you wrote this, don't get me wrong, but you could have used some lube, or at least saliva. Just some constructive critizism. Overall it was pretty good.
| stand-alone-ninja-004 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
O_0?THIS IS YOUR FIRST FAN FICTION?...wow your REALLY good...