|Reviews for Attachment|
| ThePolicyOfTruth chapter 1 . 5/26
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| guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
Love the story and the lemon your a fantastic writer shame theirs no sequels or other institute story's xxx
| Ischemia chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Happy you added this on! Great job on the lemon.
| Catt002 chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I loved that quote;
'or maybe it already has and no one's noticed yet'
it literally made me 'aww' in the middle of the night.
and it was smexy too~ good job with the lemon.
| THKnight chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
This was super cool, well writin, and the last bit was touching and well funny, i almost laughted my head off, and you should do the twister, lol
| HarvesttheVampire chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I. Love. This. You are so good at writing!
| Kerrigas chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Hooaaaaahhhhh... That was hot.
I just finished Crazy for You and this was the perfect icing... mmmmmm I'm not generally a Ryou x Fan, generally being more oriented, but I must admit this story was quite good 3
Keep it up
| Gee chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
You make me very happy :) I'm so glad I discovered thissss. :) Amazing! :) And now I really want noodles.
| DemonKittyAngel chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
I love it. not the best lemon i've read by far but I like how you write this pairing do much that it really works for me.
| RoseleafISHTAR chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
I vote you DO write the Twister thing XD
I loved this. Crazy for you was so great (and I just had to read this, despite it being a lemon...Im a bad person) XD
KEEP IT UP BUDDY!
| Nightly Halo chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
really quick / haha but hot )
not bad for your first lemon xD
i feel like such a perv now
| Nephelae chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Those two playing twister! That's just.. Awesome.. xD *laughs*
*Ahem* Right.. Um... What was I supposed to be doing?
OH! Review! Okay! U
God was that hot! o_o The ending was so cute though, and I sense some sort of irony that I cannot comprehend... but still just so Kawaii!
I compliment your use of dialog! And I just love mariku in this fic to DEATH! He's just so... Mariku!
Ryou's good too. Actually I'd say he's slightly OCC, but we really don't know anything about him to begin with... And it's supposedly AUish, so yeah. What do I expect out of you people? (Ra knows my first attempt at Ryou will be beyond OCC...)
Unforunately I'm cheating right now, becuase I haven't actually finished and been able to review Crazy For You yet..On chappy 15!) But I had to cheat and see a lemon. It's in my nature. (Oh, and the voices told me to do it! o_o) (lmao xD)
I suppose you did fairly well for the lemon part, though not very descriptiive... (DETAILS RULE ALL FANFICTION!) But it's not a big red light or anything so you can relax
It was just awesome otherwise.. I mean really, just plain amazing. Bravo. Bravo. (encore! encore! xD)
Overall, it was just epic! You know we love your stories (and things like this especially~!), or anything you write for that matter.
Oh, and we love you too Mariku!
"Yes, I heard you the fourth time you said it. So shut the Hell up!"
So yes, I give it two and a half thumbs up, and kudos, and even Ice cream to you! (Yay, Ice cream!)
| sissy fan and yumi fan chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I read this at midnight and I just felt so good after reading it but that might have bun the fact that I was slightly over imagining the scenes even ones that didn't happen "Taking a shower together" but it was a good read
| ddtrunks77 chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
That is so sweet!...Please let him out already!He cwn't stay there forever!PLEASE,LEASE!If you are writting about them playing twister let them be out in their ouwn space...Marik kind of deserves it...
Lots of love! And Cookies!
| FreshFish chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
Uhm... This is nice.. lol
Sorry, it's great I'm just speechless..
It's about stinkin time I guess..