Reviews for the black rose
witchdivasirenqueen chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
This is so sad! I really wish I could give you a hug right now...but despite the saddness, this is really well written. the only thing I can critique is how often you used the word it. a more personal word would be easier to relate to for the audience. I like your perspective, and the final line is fabulous. over all amazing.
Qem chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Interesting poem.
Johannas mirror chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
you sound like my boyfriend. Good. I liked it. Interesting take on orriginality, but reused themes about lonlyness.
SilverLastsForever chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
That's creepy and dark. I hope you don't want to slaughter me! Lol, it was a great poem though. Very dark, very scary.