Reviews for Showdown
VogueThousand chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Awesome job !
Prepare to be FLAMED Bitch chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
I applaud you for yet another disgusting, horrible PWP. I don't care if it's femmeslash, but that was excessive! Your grammar was not bad, save for a few mistakes.

If you're going to write smut, or at least *that* smutty, you need to forewarn unsuspecting readers! Your summary said they take out their lust or passion or whatever out on each other, but that was too darn bland. You need to be more specific. God, this story absolutely DISGUSTED me. Despicable and an insult to fanfiction!

Please, no more smut between family, friends, or anyone else... Now please excuse me while I regurgitate my breakfast and rub shampoo in my eyes...
DylanMeushaw chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
you writing another chapter? This was completely hot!
Werid-O-Ville chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
wow.. i never thought of syd and lauren together... luv it