|Reviews for Shadows of the Mind|
| lethalshikaino chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
this is a legend!. xDD no words could describe how awesome this fanfic is. keep it up! I love this, tee off!
| lethalshikaino chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
sweet. :) WEW. now, when it comes to Ino, Shika will do everything it takes.
| TeamShikaIno chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
I loved it. Shikamaru and Ino were definitely in character and your showed their personalities exactly how they are in the anime/manga. I absolutely loved it!
| hnjknb chapter 2 . 8/22/2010
| milan1010 chapter 4 . 8/21/2010
i love how you write all this story...very endearing...
| GejimayuGirl chapter 3 . 6/19/2010
| GejimayuGirl chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
| an1m3.l0v3rs.gr4sp chapter 2 . 10/3/2009
you write well... im really enjoying these oneshots
| an1m3.l0v3rs.gr4sp chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
aw! that was such a cute story. thanks for sharing.
| SarcasticallyTroublesomeGirl chapter 4 . 9/3/2009
HAHAHA i hope too many pieces of Cap'n Crunch havent fallen into the sea. lmao, good chapter. It was oddly easy to imagine. For some reason, I can really see everything happened in an AU so great job.
| nerviouza chapter 3 . 8/31/2009
I'm not really a fan of Harry but his fans will
kill me if he gets killed... hahaha
Another job well done by the master... I love it!
| nerviouza chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
you know what everytime I reach the end of the story
Idon't know if i will read the notes below it just
I can whistle but the only ones that can hear are my
pair of ears... yeah too bad well keep practicing _
| nerviouza chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Woah it's my first time reading this story and
squirrels will be killed?
Stop killing squirrels but don't stop writing
| ArAshiMitArAshi chapter 4 . 8/27/2009
I'm clueless about golf so I had to read this chapter very, very carefully. But it was a good read as always from you *thumbs up*
I understand your situation. Been there, done that. But you could always write little by little (yep, I'm encouraging you)
| twiinklestar chapter 2 . 8/13/2009
Okay, so I OBVIOUSLY couldn't review for the next chapter seeing as you promised the death of Harry Potter. So I had to go back a chapter and make my review here (: Lucky I managed to save a tree. But there will be no Harry Potter saving for me.
So the first chapter seemed a little bit.. OOC to me... but the writing was still good.
The second one was cute. I especially liked the part where they're asking each other questions. Shikamaru's being more along the lines of just ticking her off by asking "Why?" continually whereas Ino wanted to know who he was impressing. It was cute (: But I can't seem to figure why people would find whistling attractive... whistling is hard. I can do it, but some of the higher notes are pretty tough to hit.
The third one was my favorite. Chouji's all-knowingness was pretty funny and a good add-on. I think the random duck describing was pretty creative too. I liked the part where Shikamaru is describing Ino -again- but in more detail this time. His description is really sweet.
You did a great job on the writing for all of these one-shots. There were a few typos in each of the fics but they were very minimal. Good work!