|Reviews for Tug of War|
| Gianna di Fiori chapter 14 . 2/17
This was a fun, fantastic read! It had suspense, intrigue, brotherly angst, drama, and just so much more! I will have to make sure I find more of the same from this talented writer.
| Cutter12 chapter 14 . 8/28/2012
Wonderful story. I loved all of the characters thoughts contrasting with what they said and did. Very clever story, and a most enjoyable read. :D
| Jane Mays chapter 11 . 1/2/2011
Just going over some of your older work whilst waiting (impatiently) for a new Numb3rs story and had to say how much I enjoyed this chapter, especially the bit with the IT geeks. A typical example of how your work encompasses great drama with some lighthearted comedy scenes. Truly, you are a great writer and my favourite Numb3rs author.
| LockBox22 chapter 14 . 12/27/2009
This was really a good read! I liked reading a story where Don and Charlie were caught in a bigger plot then just another one about them bickering.
My favorite part would have to be when the old lady hit Colby with the cane. i laughed so hard!
| Nita chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
sorry, but I wish you did know better.
| blueblackangel chapter 14 . 10/26/2009
Awesome! I'm behind on homework now, but it was an awesome story; great job! Kept me hooked the whole time
| whitelighter013 chapter 14 . 10/2/2009
| spnMom chapter 14 . 5/9/2009
I haven't been reading Numb3rs fics that long (Supernatural is my #1 fav), but you write the best stories so far. Nearly every one of yours that I have read (sorry, I might not have commented on all of them), is just like watching an episode. You have some nice whumpage (which I love) without getting carried away. Some people are more concerned with the whumping than the story (of course I like those too :-). Thanks for a bunch of good stories...
| Rat chapter 14 . 1/31/2009
I love your numb3rs fic. You do a great job at focusing on the brother relationship, and of making Charlie a believable, likable character. It's like how you write Daniel in SG-1, brilliant but flawed, and cautious but not a coward.
| Gamine Madcap chapter 14 . 3/3/2007
Hehe...that's beautiful. You didn't say so, but it sounds like you're finished...I'm not sure whether I should congratulate you for finishing a wonderful story or not, cause I'm not sure if it's really done or not. But anywho...yayness! Keep up the great work, and hope to see more from you soon!
| Taura Callisto chapter 14 . 3/1/2007
Very excellent story! I hope you have another good one waiting to be cooked up. Great work. )
| prin69 chapter 14 . 3/1/2007
hahaha, the back shed! of course! :) gotta love charlie
| Leoloco chapter 14 . 3/1/2007
Yay! Nice ending to a great story! :D
| bagira chapter 14 . 3/1/2007
LOL - cute way to finish off. To be honest, even I forgot about the shed. Poor Don :)
And talk about plot twists - who expects a bunch of old people to be behind an incrediby complex operation like this? I would almost have suspected David Sinclair before any of them! Of course, Colby *would* get the violent lady with the cane, naturally. I found the comment about Morton fishtailing "just right" to be a little flimsy, but then I didn't know there was a Quantico driving course... whatever. I still don't like her.
Thanks for the story!
| Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 14 . 3/1/2007
Wonderful story! Great characters (real and originial)! Well planned, detailed plotline that moved quick enough so there was plenty of time for whumping poor Charlie. Loved it!