|Reviews for Let Go|
| Anime OO Otaku chapter 4 . 2/26/2007
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Woah, so ur 17...i'm almost there too! Anywya, I didn't expect a Meyrin chapter but I like it. THe sibling bond is cute. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Nice appearance of Cagalli by the way. So companion fics? Is that why Meyrin's thoughts on Athrun aren't really elaborated too much? I CAN'T WIAT FOR COMPANION FICS!(esp the Asucaga one XXD)
| Smokey-eyed-Beauty chapter 4 . 2/25/2007
Oh, interesting. I like how you portrayed Meyrin's feelings towards Shinn, you know never hating him for almost killing her and Athrun, but loathing him for breaking her sister's heart, how sweet!
| Housenka chapter 4 . 2/25/2007
loved this chapter! and i liked how it was told from Meyrin's POV, it kinda makes sense because of course meyrin would play a large part in Shinn and Luna's lives for obvious reasons!
shinn and meyrin, PE teachers? don't know if i'm being rude or not, but i would think that with their minds, they would have been able to get jobs with more skills involved...especially meyrin with her computing skills
but i guess maybe it's because they're still suppose to be young?
shinn seems so sorry for his actions...though if i were meyrin i would be angry with him too
but i guess i'll have to wait till the next chapter to see how luna reacts to seeing the two of them huh?
anyways have a HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
| NatsuLucyNatsu chapter 4 . 2/24/2007
can't wait for shinn's reaction when he sees luna.. and also maybe for the companion fics for this hehe
| DruggiesLove chapter 3 . 2/20/2007
Wow, most intense chapter so far. I love it. THe breakup certainly is not what i expected. Can't wait for mroe.
| NatsuLucyNatsu chapter 3 . 2/18/2007
you're right, we need a lot of sxl post gsd fics...
this is interesting... poor luna S i just hope shinn would realize his feelings for her...
keep it up!
| Anime OO Otaku chapter 3 . 2/17/2007
OMGZOMFG oh Shinn oh SHinn! What did you do! Be mad at Mwu, not Luna! I agree with you on that Mwu thing. i really do like the SEED Mwu better than Neo Lornoke. Sure I love MxM but ugh, how dare you betray Stellar's trust like that! Sure he's under Djibril's pressure but he's a frigging Tai-sa, he could've done something!
Anyways, I'm starting to change my mind abou now. I quite like them together now (despite Shinn's...obvious problems) Oh yea, I also think it's neat you've brought Minerva back on Yzak's crew on it! Dearka...gotta love that dude.
(add to fav!)
| ri-kun chapter 3 . 2/17/2007
Well, I don't know... The second chapter seemed to portray Lunamaria overly...eccentric and giddy like a schoolgirl. It was as if you pushed her to the limit of a clichéd female character only allowed to stay by the sidelines for the man of their dreams- if you don't mind me saying.
However, how she was portrayed afterwards, was a bit better- well suited to my tastes. But the whole in-character thing depends on person to person so I won't lag on.
Personally, I find this story interesting; however, I find it quite hard to keep reading. It's as if I know I WANT to read it, but my mind is saying I don't. It's the same for certain animés I watch where many people say the show is amazing, but for me, I find it very difficult to keep watching more than one episode a week. This story is like that. It's entirely my fault, but that does not prevent me from reading until the end. Alas, I apologize that I cannot input any positive or- how should I say?- encouraging reviews. But this one person's opinion should not pull you down. You have many people who enjoy your stories and share your opinions. Sadly, I am not one of those people, but I will indulge in your writing as long as I can. Just like the title of chapter 3, "Conflicted Heart", that is me in a nutshell about this story.
P.S. You keep mixing up your tenses, and I suggest you to look over chapter 2 and 3 again. I couldn't help but laugh when you wrote "stimulation" instead of "simulation". Oh, and another note, in the GS/D universe, only two people have every referred the Gundam as a Gundam and those two are Kira and Cagalli. Everyone else- including the two mentioned above- just refer it to a "mobile suit" or MS as it is the correct term in this universe.
| Housenka chapter 3 . 2/17/2007
what an amazing chapter! Shinn slapping Luna! poor luna, shinn was just mad at Mwu, not you!
and yes, i hated Mwu after Stellar's death! and it pissed me off that he didn't feel bad or anything, just forgot everything adn it was all ok for him_ argh! i hate him...sorry, don't know if that's a flame or not!
but i luv you story! adding to my favourites! it's really good, and i'm so glad you're writting about Shinn and Luna! makes it soo much better and more refreshing!
| Smokey-eyed-Beauty chapter 3 . 2/17/2007
YAY! A Shinn/Luna story that will actually end up with them together (they'd bettercoughcough). I'm really enjoying it so far. Mainly because most Shinn/Luna stuff I find here usually has the same, depressing plotline (about 200-500 words on how Luna is hopelessly devoted to Shinn and he'll never get over Stellar) so yours is very refresshing. Can't wait to see more!
| DruggiesLove chapter 2 . 2/12/2007
Now the story gets really interesting..so what do you mean when they break up? How did they break up
i like the academy flash back it's cute.
| Anime OO Otaku chapter 2 . 2/11/2007
:3 So you're gonna update these two fics the same time each week? That's great!
So much anagst in this chap, and i like the part Luna 'talking' to Rey at the graveyard.
Also, I I kinda like the academic part. It's cool and cute.
| Housenka chapter 2 . 2/11/2007
great fic! really interesting! and original! please continue! i luv the pairing of Shinn and Luna (though YS are my favourite...and i'm glad they're in it as well _)
good luck on the next chapter!
| DruggiesLove chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Interesting start. can't wait for more
| Anime OO Otaku chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Okay, I've been a fan of all your stories, so i decided to check this out. This is the first of your story that didn't feature my favorite pairing, but somehow I'm a tad intesrested in Shinn and Luna now (well, it IS post GSD so poor Shinn, the guys needs someone) I like how they first met lol it was pretty funny.
So, again, can't wait until you update!