|Reviews for Angela's gift|
| Zach chapter 95 . 2/26
did you kill saphira at the end of this book?
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
| Guest chapter 95 . 11/9/2013
awesome book! but I hope I can find your next book because I hate cliffhangers
| TopTop chapter 77 . 10/20/2013
Angela is a dick, not a small one but, a huge dick... you describe well
| TopTop chapter 67 . 10/20/2013
Good job i was dissapointed but all has turn better, i could not ask for a better story
| TopTop chapter 64 . 10/20/2013
Im thinking...Im thinking...Im thinking... Good so far your level of writing is mastery but the story its self ... hmmmm?
| TopTop chapter 61 . 10/20/2013
I hope you dont keep changing my ming its giving me quite a powerful head ache...i am sorry for insults but.
WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING DOING SUCH CRAZY, yet imotional, BUT CRAZY SO THANK YOU BUT I HATE YOU BUT STILL THANK YOU
| TopTop chapter 60 . 10/20/2013
I take back my nice comments (gives a devilish look with more fury then god himself) impress me in these few other chapters i might consider taking this "threat" back)
| TopTop chapter 57 . 10/20/2013
you should write a book... it is the most delightful story i have read yet, and i thank you, and also thank you agian for using your precious time to read my message (or how ever the hell you spell it)... may you live long and happy and the wind and sun be at your back
| Guest chapter 53 . 10/4/2013
Yes! Good job for calling trianna a bitch, but u could have made it more grafic, like ripping her heart out and making slide eat it
| WaterSparks chapter 18 . 9/14/2013
Very well developed for the story over all, I like how you've been doing this! keep it up!
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/10/2013
I'm sorry, but I want to punch your Eragon in the face. The original Eragon and your Eragon are like dumb and dumber when it comes to relationships. The original was dumb because he was ignorant to Arya's feelings, her mate had died in the very beginning of the story, then around one and a half years later (which is a very short period of time for elves) Eragon comes in and proclaims his "love" for her, while she is obviously still torn up about his death. And your Eragon is dumber because he wants her to suffer for his stupidity. By the way I highly doubt that Arya would break down because the "great and mighty" Eragon refuses to love her. It seems a bit like a guy-stu story, where every female (except for Angela, hopefully) will fall in love with him.
Don't get me wrong, you have a wonderful writing style, it's just what your writing about that I don't like. This is as far as I'm going to read this story, and even though I don't like it I hope others with different preferences will enjoy it, and I hope you will enjoy writing it.
| Reap3r.55 chapter 29 . 7/22/2013
Why did you nerf the characters in the books they could have killed any of staves me by uttering a single word in the ancient language and arrows don't penetrate dragon scales in the books so yeah next time get your facts strait man other than that great story
| Anonymous chapter 32 . 7/15/2013
The sun rises in the east and sets in the west does it not?
| person chapter 95 . 7/2/2013
good work thought about publishing it yet