Reviews for The Dance
xx-chaingang-killer-legs-xx chapter 4 . 8/12/2007
great story :)
twiinklestar chapter 4 . 7/28/2007
aw ! that was so cute ! i loved it . good job .
stephy04 chapter 4 . 6/28/2007
i love it there first kiss took them forver lol
evapisces chapter 3 . 3/20/2007
Another great chapter. You're a really good writer. And about the order of the chapters: it's not confusing at all, actually i kinda liked the out-of-order-ness (if that's a word). :)
evapisces chapter 2 . 3/20/2007
That was so great! I could really visualize the story line while reading it. :)
feelingxelectricx chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
OF course you should continue it,it's awesome!
KenzieKub chapter 4 . 2/22/2007
i really liked it
raindropsX chapter 4 . 2/17/2007
aw. so cute. love it
jennyperson91 chapter 4 . 2/9/2007
aww! i loved it! i didnt think it was that corny. it was cute. as for your next story, i think you should embelish their first kiss a little more. just an idea. i cant wait to read your next story! :D
sourpunch45 chapter 4 . 2/8/2007
I really liked the story. Yea it was a little cheesy but cheesy is good somtimes and in this case it was fantastic!
jennyperson91 chapter 3 . 2/7/2007
i absolutley adore this story. i hope you decide to update. lol. im smileing at this story i like it so much. you have to updtate so that i could find out what happens!
sourpunch45 chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
sorry about your back. But i love your story so please update!
raindropsX chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
i caught that hint, thank you for an excellent story. continue please
BLONDEMOMENT82192 chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
y r chap 1 and 2 r they supposed to be switched?
jennyperson91 chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
my favorite line: “You know, my friend, for a photographer you can be pretty blind sometimes.” i loved that line! lol, i may wanna steal it (if you say i can :D) i love this story! cant wait to see what is going to happen next! update soon!
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