|Reviews for A Different Path|
| Shodaime Gahokage chapter 17 . 10/20
| Shodaime Gahokage chapter 16 . 10/19
Instead of "Kabe inferuno" try "Jôheki Gôka"
Kabe any physical separation that is vertical from rice paper to six feet of granite.
Jôheki rampart, castle wall or exclusion
Here one of mine
Earth style: Ground break maw
Destabilisation and Immobilisation technique
Make pitfalls like those in those video where someone or a car fall through a street pavement.
| Shodaime Gahokage chapter 12 . 10/18
This is a bold choice you made. I see the explication as in the reasons behind why Naruto whould do that.
1- he want to spare Hinata the pain.
2- this get's him more ensurence against the demon he just met.
| Shodaime Gahokage chapter 3 . 10/16
I have bad attention span, so on long chapters I tend to get sidetracked a bit, on extra long a lot of sidetrack show (and terribly when writing myself (just you see I do it again. I can't stop it)). This was medium nor extra long. Want to see extra long try reading Third Fang's fics. At least you have the important: quality. Because rare are those that enjoy rice porrige vats (long chapter of poor storytelling) or god view blugeon (this one I am guilty of, rushed exposition. That is when a character show up you get a physical description, their motivation, affiliation, all their powers, and since I get sidetracked you get description of their faction, home town, relation to other characters they know that are then descrived in the same faction. At some point it enter fantastic racism, the geo-politic status of fairyland, religions both around blown up words of some dead guys and cults around reality warping entities. All that going on and on until I realise I just put a hundred and nine words inside a parenthesis, and the characters haven't done anything yet.)
| Wolf's Shadow chapter 1 . 8/7
Thats interesting to put hinata in the branch family
| Elypsus chapter 25 . 6/26
Update soon. This is such a cliffhanger. Even though it's been eight years, I have faith in you.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/6/2016
If you are going to write a fanfiction why have you made naruto exactly the same as in cannon what is the point
| Guest chapter 25 . 7/25/2016
Pls update. It said 2009 so I should prolly give up
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/25/2016
Ibiki and Anko would so cute together️️
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/25/2016
I hope hinata gets her Byakugan back but her family I donno think she has the deal still but doesn't then she can be freeeeee! And still use her super cool taijutsu style
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2016
If there r gonna be any more couples if there's shikamaruXtemari implied or anything I will fall in love with this book! So MUCH! It would be my dream come trueueuueue
Ps I love ur work
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2016
Ur an amazing write btw
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/24/2016
I love this team so much.
i like this fanfic as well. It's as interesting as the original series. And it has more SHIKAMARUUUUU
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
My dream shinobi team
| StArLoRdMac2 chapter 2 . 6/1/2016
esto se esta poniendo cada vez mejor sobre todo la parte en donde el equipo se conoce no pude resistir las ganas de reirme por lo que Shikamaru dijo jajaja. Pero me sorprendiste al ver que el equipo estaba formado por Nruto, Hinata y Shikamaru es muy interesante.