|Reviews for Struggle|
| stef chapter 11 . 11/7/2013
Love the story please carry on x
| Feenrai chapter 6 . 2/2/2010
OMG...I read the reviews on this chapter after reading it...and I cannot BELIEVE what the anonymous "Stop" person said...the audacity to call you a liar, the trolling crudeness of attacking without any attempt at veiling it under constructive criticism...but mostly, the cruelty of saying such things and calling you a liar about such a serious thing...that's just horrible.
I'm sorry, I had to say that...because it's just wrong. Wrong to do, and wrong about what they said. I'm sure, first of all you didn't "make it up"...because who on earth would? That's just messed up to even think like that. And secondly, this story is really good! You have a great writing style. Sure, like everyone you have some room for improvment, but it's really good and flowing, and good grammar as well. It makes me so mad when people are mean like that...I bet they can't write worth a darn!
Anyway, I'm enjoying the story, and I'm SO sorry to hear about your friend, even though it's a couple years ago now. From my own experience, I know that's something you never fully get over and it's so very hard to deal with. I hope you have managed to come to terms with it as much as it can be by now, and that you're able to remember your friend and the good times you had with happiness.
Also, I don't mind that you're following the storyline of Twilight. You're changing things along the way, and as you said it's got a whole different Bella in it.
| Feenrai chapter 5 . 2/2/2010
Oh WoW! I had no clue! When did Stephenie Meyers have a sex change operation and become Stephen Meyer? I'm suprised this wasn't on the news or something...
Ok, Ok..I'm sorry...I couldn't resist
So, jokes aside. I'm really enjoyingthis story so far:) I'll leave a bigger and more in depth review when I catch up on the story...though judging by how long it's been since you updated it'll never be finished and you may or may not even read reviews anymore...but oh well _
| loch.nessie.monster chapter 11 . 7/12/2009
Ooh I like this...please update soon - you haven't updated in ages! *cries*
| Fleur24 chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
Its a very neat story so far. What exactly is wrong with Bella? Does she have cancer or something?
| Double Spell chapter 3 . 12/6/2008
*6. Befriend someone I may not like*
-a walk to remember - lol
| MakeMeWantToKeepOnReading chapter 11 . 11/29/2008
a]very good so far but why do all stories have bad(as in sad or scary) parts!
| MakeMeWantToKeepOnReading chapter 9 . 11/29/2008
Hello, I luv your ff very much.
One off my favorites.
Two things though,
1)Please reread, there are some instaces where i don't understand the sentanes.
2)(This one is more of a question)
Why are there no links on your profile?
luv your story!
| lookafteryou023 chapter 11 . 8/13/2008
hte last chapter made me bawl xD haha. please review!.(:
| jESSIE chapter 8 . 7/27/2008
you SAY link in profile
but do u mean it?
NO of course not
haha lub the story its fantastic
| TayterBug chapter 11 . 6/24/2008
OMJ! I love it :)
| JaceDamian23 chapter 11 . 6/19/2008
love your story
kind of sad its not finished
please come back and update
| JaceDamian23 chapter 10 . 6/19/2008
alright...so she has cancer..okay
sucks that edward made alice and emmett go. that was kind of rude..what if bella didnt want them to go lmfao. glad emmett finally met her though..hope they become friends later on
sucks about jack and the guy wanting bella:(
| JaceDamian23 chapter 9 . 6/19/2008
oh that is fine. I like jack, we dont need jacob...actually to be honast with oyu...i thought that jacob was the guy tha tkidnapped her..but he's a werewolf and the guy who took her was a vampire...you could make him a vampire in your story though..make it au. lmfao. thats just an idea.
anyway glad that she knows and they know she knows. but i really wish that she'd meet emmett and jasper
| JaceDamian23 chapter 8 . 6/19/2008
“Bella, calm down.”
“What are you doing here,” I hissed at him.
“I wanted to make sure you were okay.”
“I’m fine,” I whispered. Then it hit me, Charlie was gone, why was I whispering.
“Why are you whispering?”
“Because there is a boy in my room, and I am in only a towel,” then I squeaked. I was only in a towel. “Get out!”
He smirked, and walked to the door. “I will be downstairs.”
lmfao funny part
Alice chimed in before I had a chance. “We want rocker slash punk hair. Simple, and easy to deal with. Keep the length, loose some thickness.”
“Ay lub, I can do that.”
“Rocker,” I asked in a soft voice. “Alice please… I really don’t want this. This is too expen-”
“Don’t worry. I have daddies credit card. All is okay.”
that is fucking rude of alice..i mean what if she doesnt even like that hair style? also edward was a jerk to bring her there. first off he knows she hates to shop..second off she was out all night long...shes a very sick girl..dying girl. poor bella