|Reviews for Walk The Line: Season One|
| crisangel chapter 11 . 8/13/2012
Great series. Could totally picture the whole thing in my head and it would have had a permanent spot on my DVR for sure!
| crisangel chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
Yay! I like it, I really like it...
| Stormbringer951 chapter 11 . 11/7/2010
A nicely written story, with a lot of strengths and weaknesses. The story is set from Faith's point of view as she starts a new life. The writing style was good, flipping between comedy, horror and angst much like the show itself did. Faith's observations were often funny and her character felt rounded and well developed. Most of the characterization were strong throughout for all the characters.
I didn't buy the main villain. The Last Evil? It sounded corny and hammy: too much like an attempt to one-up the First Evil from Season 7. Although the way it worked using the seven sins was interesting enough, it's powers felt too small-scale to be a genuine threat to entire worlds despite what the characters said.
Also, Sara the psychic slayer felt like a superfluous character. She'd have worked just as well as a regular slayer; the bits where she relays vital information (e.g. the Last is not dead) could've been covered by Jil'hanesh and you wouldn't have needed a convoluted explanation as to why Giles is keeping her away from Las Vegas.
Overall, an enjoyable story and worth a read but not one of my favourites.
| Kuramo chapter 11 . 1/12/2010
Loved it! This story was very good...are you gonna write another one? You should...and you definitely deserve to have more reads and reviews for this. Keep up the good work. Thanks!
| Vixien00 chapter 11 . 10/21/2009
Well Done! I loved your story! one of the best i've ever read! :)
| MelHellion chapter 11 . 9/30/2009
This is one of the best Buffy/Faith story I have read and I am so happy that it didn't end on a bad note. I am all for the good story but it has always been a total bummer to read a great story and have one of the characters die after their ordeal. So thank you for writing a story with a realistic plot, well as realistic as the show goes, with a balance of sadness, drama, humor, and a good ending.
| Brend-uh-87 chapter 11 . 9/23/2009
I'm always so hooked on your stories.
| Frenchy chick chapter 11 . 9/17/2009
You're AWESOME ! I love what you do. You've such a great literary talent. It's well-written, with action and humor (especially Andrew and Anya lol)! I want another one please *puppy dog eyes*
| meetwickedfaith chapter 8 . 9/14/2009
oh and i meant to also say...i loved that poem at the end. i haven't read it before. it fits so well with the whole fic, and faith in particular. it's now been saved on my comp for future readings.
| meetwickedfaith chapter 11 . 9/14/2009
WHAT a story! perfectly executed...right amount of laughs and action, drama and suspense. so glad to see our 2 girls together at the end...and faith not running scared from buffy. this was a perfect ftvs season 1. yes, that does mean i really really want a season 2! and that hidden episode 12? can't wait for that. i hope it involves what happned directly after they were in the shower together ;). loved the pairing of jilhanesh and cordy, heaven side. cliffhanger-tastic though..you rotten tease. hit us with the next onslaught against humanity. i know the team can handle it. thanks again for an amazing read.
| Jackaddict28 chapter 11 . 9/14/2009
Love it! I just love the way you write Faith, I just hope you write more...Lots more. :)
| You Don't But Thanks Anyway chapter 11 . 9/13/2009
Absolutely incredible. This was one of the most amazing experiences of my life. Furrealz. You are a god. I bow to you. This ended perfectly... I LOVE the last scene, how we find out it's never anywhere near over, which would make sense. I love the poem; perfect.
I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT SEASON AND/OR SURPRISE CHAPTER 12. I don't think you fully grasp how much I love this series. It's almost a problem.
Again, you are amazing, this is amazing, I absolutely loved it, will read it again and again for the rest of my days, et cetera et cetera. Praise be to you and your brilliance. I'm saddened the journey's over but another shall arise! (Hopefully soon...cough).
| soulstealer247 chapter 11 . 9/13/2009
Pure awesomeness,a lovely story and definitely one of my favs. I like the music choices for this chapter, especially the last song. The end of the story was pretty much perfect. Great Job!
| Jinxgirl chapter 11 . 9/13/2009
YES YES YES! about time they said the loved each other...such a sweet scene in the shower. I'm glad Buffy was gentle and wouldn't let Faith be guilty, that she didn't blow up on her.
| Jackaddict28 chapter 10 . 9/8/2009
Please, please, please finish the story. It's so good.
I will have to keep begging until you do. :)