Excellent. A little shorter than I was looking forward to, but I still can't wait to read more. Don't make us wait too long.

The truth is out, well kinda. Even though this is going to upset remus' life a whole lot it's for the best. Sirius knows and james and peter will too. The number of people is adding up, I wonder what's going to happen.

Oh. I really like Sirius in this chapter-as a person, not a character, though I like him as a character as well, obviously... Remus needs some sense knocked into him. He hasn't done ANYTHING to make his father hurt him... Oh, I just feel so bad for the poor thing. I really think that Sirius is starting to really warm up to Remus, though; however, Remus might have really screwed it up with the yelling. Hopefully Sirius will understand why he's so sensitive about it, though... Ugh, I'm just going crazy here! Fourteen chapters in and there's been so little progress! *sighs* All for the best, I suppose.

can you add these moon lyrics...at least part of them? The song is Moondance, by Van Morrison

Well, its a marvelous night for a moondance

With the stars up above in your eyes

A fantabulous night to make romance

neath the cover of october skies

And all the leaves on the trees are falling

To the sound of the breezes that blow

And Im trying to please to the calling

Of your heart-strings that play soft and low

And all the nights magic seems to whisper and hush

And all the soft moonlight seems to shine in your blush

Oh god... poor Remus.

Thank goodness for Sirius. and for saying 'hurt'...

Wonderful, though quite heartbreaking.

**Duckies

Hello!

This is a great chapter, I loved it!

I really need to hurry up with the translation

Gak! Keep writing this, I can't wait to see what happens next!

The characters are great. particularly lupin and Sirius, and you're peter is good too (there is very little well written peter out there, so give yourself a little gold star).

The description of Remus fainting was writen very well, very atmospheric. i only fainted properly once but it was exactly like that, with eveything all going out of focus fuzzy.

And I like the way Remus sometimes snarles out the wolf. That's good too. Very believable and well written.

short, but no doubt an awesome chapter! wonderful way to expose the problem. I can't wait for you to update:)

Poor Remus and Sirius! today (march 10th) is Remus's Birthday! This was SO Good. I really hope that they become friends soon. please update soon.

very nice chapter:) i actually loved the letter/journal format. definitly a wonderful idea. please update soon:) I'M WAITING! patiently. sort of patiently. okay, i'm not waiting patiently at all, but not being patient is not going to make you update any faster. only smiley faces :) and comments like "i love this story". both of which i will include :) :) :) i love this story!

I loved the way you put all the letters. Poor Remus he should no his father is a bloody baster but he's to caring. Oh well write more soon.

Oh, wow. If Remus' dad found the letter from Professor Anders, he'd THROTTLE him. I do hope the others realize Remus isn't a complete nut and befriend him soon, it's killing me.

It seems like this is the real beginning of Sirius being abused by his mother. Like, how Regulus was surprised about how long Sirius had been in the cellar, and that he hadn't been punished at all.

Remus' dad and Sirius' mother are a little alike, I think. Different reasons, obviously-Mr. Lupin's bitter because he considers Remus to be responsible for Mrs. Lupin's death, and I think Mrs. Black's two parts crazy and three parts pissed that Sirius is a Gryffindor. Still, it's like that line from The Breakfast Club-"I think your old man and my old man should go bowling."

i'm really enjoying reading this fanfiction and check everyday after school to see if you've written more. This last chapter i thought was written well with all the journal entries and letters. Please write more as i can't wait to find out what happens next year at school.

I love how you characterize Remus! He's so cute! Update soon! Please!

-Tomm

It is SO hard to find GREAT RL/SB love stories. But finally i have found another one! Casting Moonshadows(still have not figured out that title yet) is wonderfuly written. I had to finsish all 12 chapters before i went to sleep. Keep up with the WONDERFUL work, and i can't wait for your next chapter. I have to put you under fave stories.