Reviews for Promiscious Girl
Kaiser Washington chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
This is beyond stupid: this is Mary Sue. Your OC is a goddamn abhorrent Mary Sue. She’s a Mary Sue because she was capable of making Ruakwa fall madly in love with her at first sight, and in order for a girl to attract Ruakwa’s attention, they must either be imposingly hideous or a Mary Sue. It only goes to show how much you crave attention and how negligible your intelligence is. Promiscuous Girl? Yeah right. She's a total wh*re.
amelia chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
i don't mean to flame or anything, but rukawa is really oc. i mean no offense, but honestly. do you even THINK that Rukawa would fall for a girl just because she's hot and can gyrate her hips?
nieshka chapter 3 . 4/30/2007
The whole thing reminded me of the movie Coyote Ugly. Heh. Anyway, it's nice. _