Reviews for Muma
knetterzak chapter 10 . 2/10/2014
Is this ever going to be continued? It's such a shame for it to stop at the point it got interesting.
Sutakane chapter 10 . 1/4/2013
Please continue writing. You have ended this chapter at a good point but I want to read more.

With respect,
Sutakane-chan
ReaperDuckling chapter 10 . 10/7/2011
oooooh this is just LOVELY! I can't wait until the next chapter - please update quickly :D 3
Lurkers Anonymous chapter 10 . 5/24/2011
Brilliant story, Amaiko! Your writing style is stunning, and I'm very impressed by how well you've kept every single person in character, as other reviewers have certainly told you. The transitions between times are skillfully done, giving a lot of tension to the story.

Sadly, I'm guessing this has been discontinued (or at least put on hiatus), seeing how it's been over a year since the last update. It's your choice, but I wholeheartedly encourage you to pick this up again. If you don't... well, I'll just be content with rereading what you have.

Even if I really really really wanted to see how things would play out after she was released from ANBU.

Thanks - it truly has been a wonderful read.
Chasing chapter 10 . 8/10/2010
Omg omg omg! This story (and pairing, really) is SO ADDICTING XD Please update soon!
cHi-1000-SpRiNgS chapter 10 . 5/25/2010
great update! i really love your stories! i wish you could update sooner, though i shouldn't be talking since i haven't updated my stories in god-knows-how-long, and you always turn out better than mine! love the story, absolutely adore your writing! can't wait for the next chapter! :D
scriptsneezer chapter 10 . 5/14/2010
AH! You made this so frigin well! It makes you wanna punch kabuto AND love him at the same time, confuuuusion. anyway UPDATE PLEASE QUICKLY SOON AND PREFERABLY NOW! ...please!

~scriptsneezer
WritingRin chapter 2 . 5/4/2010
Wow. Yep, this is definitely interesting! I like this camaraderie between Neji and Naruto! And you wrote Neji so well! I love it! And the switch of POV was cool because I was expecting you to stick with Hinata and have her tell us the whole story of what happened. But I like that you showed Neji and Naruto first.
WritingRin chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
*Oohhs* Interesting! I'm impressed so far. You set this up very nicely-story-telling wise. Nice job! And you seem to have a good handle on Hinata's character so this should be good.
Taichi09 chapter 10 . 4/27/2010
Hi again. I know that this is my third (fourth?) review on this chapter, but I was reading it again and wanted to comment on a part of it. I don't really care for the scene where Hinata is outside of her own body. I found it to be rather confusing, and kind of pointless. I love the rest of Muma, but this small section of it takes away from the realism I have come to love. Perhaps that scene is important for later in the story, but if not, I wouldn't have put it in there. Hope this doesn't make you angry or unhappy or offend you because that was not my intention. I simply wanted to give you some (hopefully) constructive criticism. No flames here! Still, I wouldn't have used another element of the supernatural especially so soon after the dream sequence. I thought that scene was well done, but again, if it isn't going to be used in the story later, I wouldn't have done it. Still, if you don't plan on using these scenes to play into later events, please don't change whatever you have planned! I'm sure I speak for all of your readers (or at least most) when I say I beleive we'll like however you continue this story!
Thanks for listening to my rambling!
:)
Taichi09
netbreaker0 chapter 10 . 4/17/2010
Well it was nice to hear from you agian after all this time. I look forward to Hinata trying to play Kabuto and it seems she sort of gets away with it inthe end. Still wondering how long it'll be till she get's rescued of all things. Please update soon.
Taichi09 chapter 10 . 4/15/2010
I know I already sent in a review today but I was rereading Muma (for like the 80th time) and I realized that I forgot to ask/tell you something...Can we see rough Kabuto for a change? You always write porn about Kabuto when he's being slow and taking his time (how he is normally) but it would be interesting to see him being rough...It might also be an intersting exercise for you as an author...to put the characters in an unusual situation and still have them remain in character. Just a question! Again, Muma is my favorite story and I love it! You do a great job with it and your porn is A-MA-ZING! :)
Taichi09 chapter 10 . 4/15/2010
YAY! NEW CHAPTER! You just made my day!...though the thought of new porn doesn't hurt either! Great chapter, as usual. I love how you really keep the characters in...well, character. Kabuto is such a hard character to write because of how little we really know about him, as well as how good he is at faking his personality. You also keep Hinata's strengths and weaknesses in perspective well. She's not amazingly strong, but she isn't totally weak either. All and all an amazing chapter, as I've come to expect. :) Also, you updated in 6 months this time and it was a year before that so...maybe we only have to wait 3 months this time? Well, I can hope all I want right? Again. Great chapter and looking forward to seeing more, hopefully Muma related, porn.

Great job again!
White Night Dragon chapter 10 . 4/12/2010
Oh, I've been waiting so long for this chapter, and it surely fulfilled my expectations! The only bad thing is that I'm now really fired up for another chapter, but I don't mind how long I have to wait for it as long as I know you didn't abandon this story. So, good work, and please, continue! :)
dumdeedum chapter 10 . 4/12/2010
Finally an update!

Poor Hinata, her travails with Kabuto continue. His professional and personal fascination with her is both horrific and strangely erotic. It's twisted and creepy in a Hannibal Lecter/Clarise Starling in a weaker version sort of way.

Anyway, the snake spectre is a new development. Is it a genjutsu or Orochimaru? And Kabuto doesn't seem aware of it.

The back and forth in timeline is a little confusing, so I belatedly realize this is how Kabuto manipulates her to work with him.

Well, thanks for the update and I hope to see another one soon.
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