|Reviews for Failure|
| The Final Lament chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
reasonably good story. is there gonna be another chapter
| moosey16 chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
This is absolutely amazing
| belle.nisce chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Gaah! Disgusting, yes; creepy, yes; spine-tingling, yes: I loved it. It really came alive to me, and I could see the scene at my eyes. My favorite part was Durza ripping the Urgal's heart out (ohh, so revoltingly delicious). Your perception of characters was perfect, and I wholeheartedly agree that Durza should have been an at least decent looking young 'man'. The only suggestion would be a few choices of words didn't seem too appropriate for the time frame when I was reading it, but it's only a minor flaw and nothing that really disrupted the flow of the story. Your perception of characters was perfect, and I wholeheartedly agree that Durza should have been an at least decent looking young 'man'. But overall, fantastic job, and you should definitely consider making it more than a one-shot because it's got so many plot possibilities.
| cennex chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
*squeals in delight* I loved it! The way you characterized Durza was perfect! And the whole conflict between Durza and Arya kept me on edge throught the entire thing. I applaud you!
| LeiaSedai and Umi-Chan chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
I really liked your story please contiune on with it. To be blunt it was bloody awesome! Please update soon!
| Dash-Rendar chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Defenately should be reopened. Keep it going!
| Jack Skellington's Mistress chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
NO! RAPE! TORTURE! DEATH! PAIN!
Arya deserves these things. Other than that, schweet!
| Chaed chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Wow! Another DurzaxArya fic, and it was...exeptionally well written! Are you sure you want to leave it as one-shot? It definitely got the potential for more!
| alsdssg chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
That was great. I liked how Arya wouldn't let Durza in, but she still couldn't beat him. Great writing.
| Azulcat chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
oh, poor durza... wow, u r an amazing writer! ur description and grammar is mostly perfect. and ya know what, i totally imagined durza better looking when i read the book too. the movie completely ruined the image of him in my mind, grr. nice job! are you going to write more?
| Durloth chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
Very well done! What a great story. I really enjoyed reading it - and it would be just wonderful if you would let me (and the other fans of course) read further. I'll thank you on my knees if you keep writing
Greets from Germany
| jimmy-barnes-13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
That was really good! Please continue it :D
| Chaeramir chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
wow. that was really gross. but really, really good. really well written.
is it going to be a one-shot?