Reviews for Late
Cutter12 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Ok, I'm chuckling at the end, but please, consider continuing with this story. I like your story and I think it could be rather fun reading Charlie's reaction to the whole situation.
Snarky - I like it chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Oh no!

Though of course, we know she's not.

I'd like to see Charlie's reaction to a possible baby, if he even knows! She could take a test and when thaqt says no, never tell him . . . hm

Nice ficlet, oneshot or will we have more?
ask jaz chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Awesome start! I like a story that keeps me on my toes!:)
luvnumb3rs chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
The story seems to incomplete so I guess I really can't say what I think of it. Hope you rethink teh complete sign an finish the story.
FraidyCat chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
nice ending line. i see the story says "complete", but this is only the beginning! susan looses the baby and that is why she and charlie go their separate ways, right? or, or, or...she tells him she loses the baby so he will leave her, but she is actually raising his daughter in England. or, or, or... The King of Sweden is really the sperm donor. or, or, or...