Reviews for Liability
MuslimBarbie chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Beautiful. I'm years too late (I just rewatched the anime and found a new love for Meiling) but I absolutely adored this. I think you did right by not including or continuing with a meeting between Sakura and Syaoran. This ending leaves the fic with a dark, realistic, but beautifully done ending. Favorited.
xKrysx chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
This is beautiful.

Thank you for writing.
SweetFirefly chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Poor Sakura! And poor Syaoran... I like Meiling, but I think it's sad when two people don't really love each other, and are together just for being together... (I don't know if I could explain well, my English is terrible.) Wonderful fic! Thanks for sharing it!
MistyWing chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
wow, what a shocker!

SS not together? I'm shocked.

But that couldnt really happen because of destiny. SS always.

I thought your story was very creative even though it was sad.

The whole thing was well written, so well done.
Forlorn Maiden chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Wow. That was dark, sad, and wonderful all in one. I feel sorry for them, even though I'm a Meiling/Syaoran fan. You did really well with this, and I wonder if the reason Meiling can't conceive is the price to pay for HER ommission.
Kazie Solo chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Please allow me to fangirl this time, because I can't think of a coherent review. OMG this is so good! I love the second movie, I love angst, and reading this just makes my heart ache. You're really really awesome and I love what you're writing. I hope to read more from you soon!
Tawnykit chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
Ouch. Truly heart-wrenching. I need to go reread the last volume of the manga now, so I can get a SyaoranSakura fix. Poor Syaoran, not knowing that he's lost Sakura! Poor Sakura, *knowing* that she's lost Syaoran! And even poor Meilin, waking up every morning and not knowing whether that day will belong to her or to someone that he can't even remember!

Apparently, you are very good at making your reader feel the raw emotion of your work. I congratulate you. I love it; I hate it; I'm definitely adding it to my favorites.

Very well done! :)
theLilyLady chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
that's so sad! Certainly a 'boo-hoo' moment for both cardcaptors. well, what can i say...lovely execution, as always.
Enamored-Angel chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
OMG! i so love it and enjoyed reading it. I even told my friends to read it. I almost cried. (hehe). I know it's a oneshot and all that.. but this could actually be a nice prologue. SO cute. aniway. hope to read other stories from you soon. :)
Jade chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
That's really cool.

I love the subtle hints you've given the reader as to who the characters are. Although the summary pretty much explains it, I loke how you've refrained from using names and any distinguishing features that may give things away.

Like how you've said that Syao and his wife trained, it's obviously not Sakura, but then you changed it up and used the word gemstone, which in most cases, people automatically think of Sakura's stereotypical 'Emerald' eyes, yet completely forgetting that gemstone can be used about anyone. However if the reader read carefully and paid attention, the reader should not have gotten tripped by a clever ploy.

Great Job.

I love the concept

I like how it's detailed enough yet not so muddled that it's tiresome to read.

Kudos

Keep it up
Boheme chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
SAD!

But really good anyway. _
tinkerbellie chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
i like it.. its so sad.. i just wish there was second part.. a part where they actually meet up... aghh.. so sad...