|Reviews for When I'm Gone|
| Anon chapter 1 . 10/15
"And who will you fight for when I'm gone? After his fight with Agamemnon, Achilles and Patroclus have a discussion that nearly tears them apart. But when Agamemnon thinks of a plan to get back at Achilles, the bond between cousins will be tested."
"Achilles and Patroclus have a discussion that nearly tears them apart." "but [...] the bond between cousins will be tested."
Ehm. Sounds like their discussion already tested their bond, you know, seeing as it "nearly tears them apart".
| VictorianLegend07 chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
That was lovely! _
| HospitalHorror chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
god tori this is so great
awesome expansion on the sceen from the movie...i really felt that in the movie that moment between them was awkward and not fully explained too much laid hidden behind it, this was really well written and thought out
you could almost keep going with it turn around the battle with hector you know? have them fighting together but i do love hec so you prolly shouldnt kill him
oh but you like him too so its all good
again wonderful job and i thank you for it
| Snowgurl54 chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
| kaylennz chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
This was very well written and enjoyable to read. Loved your portrayal of the relationship between the two cousins. Everyone was very in character - from what I remember ;)
| HaloFin17 chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
YAY! Another Patroclus fic, thank you! This was fantastic! You need to watch the movie more often so you can get some more creative literary inspiration )
Agamemnon is such a loser, and you portrayed that beautifully. I hate it in the movie when he says "that boy just saved this war for us" after Patroclus dies. Gr...Makes me so mad.
But I loved this fic, another one for the favorites list! I so appreciate your portrayal of Patroclus and Achilles - still like brothers, with Achilles of course being a little overprotective. Oh, wonderful! I love your Troy fics, hon, please keep up all the good work! I can't wait to read more from you soon!