Reviews for Pretty Girl
iphis15 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
To fight like a girl is to fight to the death and without mercy.

That's basically what popped into my head after reading this.

Yes, there should be schools for this pairing. Yes, they would somehow have made daisy-chains.

~Mademise Morte
Sasake chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
I really enjoyed this, really quite touching story. It almost could have done without the sex, or the sex should be part of a bigger story at least. I think this is a really interesting relationship to look at and that you handled it very cleverly. My only problem is that it's not longer!
Shiro Ryuu chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Like, ZOMG o_o Yeah... I don’t know if it’s really appropriate to tell you how that got me all hot and bothered, but oh well, I just told you anyway :D

Ha ha ha, yeah, remember me? ; You’ve sure been busy... I’m sorry I haven’t reviewed anything in ages (I really am, I’m sure I’m missing out on more than you are!), but, you know... I fail at life _; I’ve got like 100-plus unanswered e-mails, seriously... I really don’t know if I’ll catch up on them before summer vacation... (it’s that whole senioritis thing, I guess).

But anyway, more about the story! Hee, it was very smexy porn, but it was also a very pretty story. I agree with the first reviewer, I loved the way you developed the relationship. Tilda’s growing fascination was—adorable? Yeah I thought the dream/fantasy bit was particularly beautiful; that’s some creative imagery there, I like a lot. And then, after that... well, I don’t know if it’s that I’m not as desensitized to girl!porn as I am to boy!porn or if it’s just that you naturally triumph in everything you do, but I think I better ought to have a cold shower. How dare you disrupt my evening by making me take a shower an hour early xD
Seregwen Morthil chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Oh, so good!

This one is gorgeous, it's definitely going on my faves list.

I do like this pairing quite a bit.

You handle femmeslash excellently.

And I really like the evolution of the relationship.

It's not just,

"Once upon a time, there were two girls. They met each other at a nasty place and decided to shag like bunnies in their spare time. Then they burnt down the nasty place and all the other little bitches who lived there. The End."

Always nice to have some interesting plot development.

Keep writing, ethereal one!

-seri