I love that all Bella did to "save her race" was pretend that she was "with" a guy. LMFAO, that's how bad ass she is. LOL And it made so much sense. She thought the illuminati was a ring, so of course what she would do is wear it...and be around the person that wants all vamps dead more then anyone all the time. Sounds like a solid plan right?

I want to think that just bella is a retard but its overlapping onto the writer because really? Its that stupid.

Why would Edward even try to love another fucking human? He knows damn well bella is his mate...and why would he try to fuck with A HUMAN? ON PURPOSE? And is he so stupid that he doesn't know that the volturri will fucking kill him if he lets another human know what he is? Well, hanging out with a human for over a month is a sure fire way to let that fucking happen.
Im not happy with this shit. I would have like it better if he had tried with a vampire at least THAT would have made some sense without making Edward look fucking stupid.

I don't see Edward putting himself out there for another human, that doesn't even make sense.

This got fucking weird fast. Bellas answer to "save" Edward was to steal an unconscious girls clothes and dance for the wolves? LMFAO. And now shes gonna marry jake to "protect" Edward? LMFAO. That doesn't make sense, at all.

Why is Bella talking to Alice? I don't give a single shit what she used to be to bella, after what she did she should never be forgiven. its as simple as that. fuck that bitch.

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Great chapter. Great cliff-hanger! Great everything! Keep writing please!

Great first chapter. Keep writing please!

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Great story! I feel like I have beat up emotionally. Thanks

Thank God! I was having an anxiety attack.

I have to be honnest, i dont like the ending. How could she put him though this when he had already gone though so much? And having Marcus trying to be with her is wrong because if i understand it correctly the Illuminati is passed down from generation to generation and he and Marishka started it so he is like her distant grandfather! The ending just didnt have enogh of the happily ever after that i thought they deserved after going though so much. Sorry, it was really really good, just not my style...

OH Man! How could you kill Alice? First you make her in to a sort of villian and now you kill her! I cant believe this! And you kill Jake too. Man this chapter was so painful but not in a teary way but in a heart wrenching kind of way. I'm glad that Bella and Edward are finally together and that all of the mysteries are clean up, well kind of all of them. I'm guessing the reason Alice was there is because she had a vision and tried to help, but why didnt she tell anyone? Or is that how the Cullens knew to come?

I love that they got to spend the day together. It was so cute and romantic... and then it got ruined. Well i cant wait to see what happens!