Reviews for Grocery Store
Fenris Jin chapter 6 . 2/27/2013
Only a little longer for Kenshin to wait.. Not that his big brother is here.. maybe he can speed things up?

Wonder who it would be? Hiko? Battousai?
Fenris Jin chapter 5 . 2/27/2013
I think Kenshin should try to be more err.. specific with his words.. at this rate, this waiting game might span a few generations off before this mystery woman comes around..XD
Fenris Jin chapter 4 . 2/27/2013
Kenshin's slowly working his way up.. Such a dedicated man! XD

This is so adorable.
Fenris Jin chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
Aww.. tsk2. I wonder how Kenshin would take that hit..

The banters are still so fun!
Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 2/27/2013
The banters are really funny. First-rate I'd gather.

How come I get the feeling that Kenshin's getting a wee bit stalker-ish? xD
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Well aren't they just adorable?

Whoa? His ex got married last month? Talk about whirlwind.. XD
Syra Sunn chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Just have to (actually it's a bit pointless but I'll go ahead anyways) say that I actually DID cut off my own waist-length hair and donate it to Locks of Love... It's cool how you write Kaoru's thoughts, because it was exactly what I was thinking.

- Syra
sweetiesugar chapter 10 . 12/7/2012
holy carp. Yes, I said carp not the other word for poop XD
This.
was.
Amazing.
I mean, who thinks of them meeting in a supermarket and omg... whoa. I mean really.
Holy Carp.
If anyone is doing what I do and is reading the reviews before the story to see if it's good or not... I'm not shitting you, read it. It's amazing.
And like... wow. Holy carp.
And your writing style... how old are you? and what country do you live in? I sound like a pedo, sorry XD you don't have to answer XD
Tifa07 chapter 10 . 6/13/2012
Hehehe too lazy to login :D Anyway, this story was fun to read. I enjoyed the dialogues, definitely love the flirting. It is such nice AU story, usually i don't read AUs but you wrote this very well. Thanks for sharing this! ;D
Tifa07 chapter 10 . 6/13/2012
Hehehe too lazy to login :D Anyway, this story was fun to read. I enjoyed the dialogues, definitely love the flirting. It is such nice AU story, usually i don't read AUs but you wrote this very well. Thanks for sharing this! ;D
SailorMeowMeow chapter 10 . 6/5/2012
That was a beautifully crafted cheesy romance story :D
Raina Darlig chapter 10 . 2/26/2012
SO CUTE!

Loved it!
anthora3 chapter 5 . 12/11/2011
"I'm not breaking anyone's heart. I'm waiting for the right woman to come to her senses." -FTW!

I really love the dialogues!
anthora3 chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
i think i've reviewed your story before, but i'd like to say something again.

I love how you narrate the story through dialogues. you can actually tell how their relationship is developing through their interactions with each other.

and i love their psuedo-flirty banter
GalanthaDreams chapter 10 . 12/2/2011
Something about this story: You can't just skip over it or skim it. You have to read each bit carefully like you're savoring that last piece of chocolate or else you feel horribly cheated. Your story is that wonderful. :)
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