Reviews for Niichan no Otouto
happycorrection chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
If u already bee corrected it actually means Older brother's younger brother. No is a particle in japanese it adds a purlal (if i spelt it right). So in japanese it would be 兄ちゃんの弟
xxXxx chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Aaaawww... so cute!
bloodytears87 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
so cute! 3
Pokabu chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Aw, Ace is such an adorable and protective older brother! I really enjoy how he doesn't understand the emotions, but still listens to them by not letting Plum hold Luffy. xD
Mina chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
I like Plum. And of course ace und Luffy too

i hopr you soon write more
sasuke-annihilater chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
I think I faved this some time ago, but I read it again and just felt like placing a review. :D They're really cute! Also, about the title, it actually means "the older brother's younger brother". If it was "and", it should be Niichan to Otouto. Err, if you didn't already know that by now... XD
longgnol chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
i love you luffy and ace brother stories!
Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
This is adorable and very well written! And pretty much error free. All I saw was a few spots where the sentences were a bit run on, and reasonability’s should be spelled responsibilities in the place you're using it.

The biggest thing that impressed me was that for once, somebody actually writes an OC around here who has a purpose and isn't a sue. XD Very nicely done there.

It was also very in character. In general, a great read. :)
Darkyu chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Nah! Plum seems like a good and no annoyng person. I would like to see her in more storyes of yours! I LOVE when people write fics with Luffy newborn and Ace with him! It's just my weak point(besides ZoLu, of course)! Well, thank you for writing this, I really enjoy it!
LuffyxRuby chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Cute!
Gao Yun Yun chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
Great! Having been a fan of Luffy and Ace since 6th Grade, It felt good to finally see a BROTHERLY Fic for these two, especially after having seen so..many..Yaoi..ones...(As of yet, I have no reason to hate Yaoi, but I draw the line when it comes to siblings) Anyway, I can't wait to read more of you're fics!
snogboxwibblywobbly chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
this was the sweetest story I have ever read with Ace and Luffy. And you should definately keep Plum. She stregthened the plot more.
toastycakes chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Aw, so cute! I love Ace and Luffy (not really the incest stuff, but whatever). They're awesome. Plum seems okay. I'm not too big a fan of OCs, but that's your choice. All in all, I liked it. Good job.
Spellcaster Hikaru chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
*dies from the cuteness* X3 I'm a bit of a tomboy myself but it'd take someone that was really cold to not want to cuddle chibi Luffy and Ace. X3 They're so kawaii! *huggles* If I was Plum I'd want to have pictures of them too. X3 Also I like Plum. She certainly doesn't act like a Marry Sue and since you've already said that she probably wouldn't appear too often I don't see any reason to get rid of her. _ Oh! I just noticed that you're the person who wrote 'To take back everything' and 'Flu Bugs and Vegetable Soup!' XD I'm not entirely sure if I reviewed on those *shify eyes* but they were good! X3 Chibi Ace and Luffy are so cute and you write them so well! Must read more of your fics! X3
Solo Loco Ellingson-Rose chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
Gyah gyah wah~! That was so cute! Very well written Colhan30! I really liked the way you wrote it too! (Not to mention that you're actually literate...)

As for Plum, I didn't love her, but I didn't hate her either. _' Sorry, that doesn't really help.