Reviews for New Love Found |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You switch tenses a lot. Maybe reading your work again will help you see the typos and edit them? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() fantastic story |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great keep it coming |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorry to hear about what happened take your time and keep me posted till next time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good two chaps. Catch ya on the flip side. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was gr8, keep at it |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww! kyle is so sweet! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting read. However, even though it's alternate universe, I feel Trent is WAY out of character. Like another reviewer said, he'd NEVER hit a girl when he's himself. When he's evil, maybe...but, however, that's just my opinion. Other than that, great job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really hope trent doesn't go after Kira! at least if he tries, have Kira beat his ass and have him put in jail or something. men like trent should be stopped. so far, i like your story. keep connor and kira together. they're a great couple and one of my favs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story is rated M not Pg-13 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok... No way. You have just gone too far. I HATE bashing, but I'll let you do what you wish. Its just that the characters are WAY too OOC. Trent hitting a girl? Never. When he was evil, maybe, but after that? And unmorphed? No way. Ugh. Thats just my opinion. Feel free to take it as a flame, but that wasnt my intention. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg omg omg that was great please write more. |