|Reviews for Control|
| Fantasy0506 chapter 4 . 2/27/2012
I love it, dark and brooding as it is.
| layhee chapter 4 . 7/9/2008
Interesting. Very dark, but a good look into Kara's mind, and I think you did a great job with it. :) Very nice! Thumbs up from me!
| AngelONight chapter 4 . 4/5/2008
the story was very intense
ur writing is very good
i look forward to reading more stuff written by u
| Icuras chapter 4 . 5/15/2007
That was really twisted. But, hey, twisted is good. Very, very good.
| Logan X chapter 3 . 5/3/2007
I read "The Hunt" and really enjoyed it. However i cant say the same for this story. It's terrible. Leoben's not a rapist, he's not even a villain really. I know it was a bet and all but i dunno, just didnt enjoy it.
| gibgirl4 chapter 4 . 4/12/2007
I've just finished reading this and wanted to let you know that even as dark as this fic was I enjoyed your writing.
| NicolinaN chapter 4 . 4/10/2007
OK, wow! O_O
As much as I'd like, and I would, I don't think I could ever write this. I'm too much into the hurt comfort business... :sighs: But I admire anyone who can pull a fic like this off. Good work.
| romeoharvey chapter 4 . 3/1/2007
I wasn't scared away from chater three, well I was scared by it, but I only just now read the last two chapters. Man, this story is evil, but I couldn't stop wishing that there would be a good ending anyways...
I like how Kara wasn't totally destroyed, I mean if she still has a drive to live, there may be hope for yet, right? Please say yes.
Good job on writing such a dark story, I can truthfully say i am now a little more sadder than when I began reading.
| stardust2002 chapter 4 . 3/1/2007
Wow. I finally caught up and reading 3 chapters in a row was honestly like watching it all play out in front of me. Bravo - you really have an amazing way of detailing the scene and her thoughts and fears so that I can almost feel what she's feeling.
I love that someone actually took the time to think on what might have happened to Kara during the missing 4 months. And given her response when she got back - her dark attitude and her inability to withstand even Sam near her, I can fully imagine this was what it was like.
Fabulous piece - dark, gritty, fearful ... but exactly what I think RM wanted us to imagine happened to her. Something that she couldn't just 'get over' and will haunt her for the rest of her life.
Great work - thanks for sharing. :)
| Firewolfe chapter 4 . 2/28/2007
shows that Kara had no guts and no desire to fight. Pity She is suposed to be awarrior. Sometimes you have a choice even if it is only death and sometimes it is the wiser one for the good of all. She knew what the cylons thought that she was important for some reason. For that alone she should have fought and forced them to destroy her rather then becomeing weak pawn.
Then again this is what one would expect of "Starbuck" No concerns beoyond her own selfish desires. She could destroy the cylon and should have kept trying to do so at every chance. Individual surviaval is not more important then humanity. In this she was n o better then Baltar at least he is honest about wanting to survive no matter the cost.
| Uberscribbler chapter 2 . 2/19/2007
I was prepared for a salaciously detailed, gratuitously violent piece telling of conduct more befitting the Spanish Inquestion than "Battlestar Galactica". Instead, Alec Star treats the storyline seriously and, in lieu of detail, he writes with an emphasis upon atmosphere. What was portrayed on-screen failed to communicate the raw terror of Starbuck's situation, and the very thought of what is to come...what it will lead to...is unsettling to say the least.
Alec has successfully done so in just two chapters. And we know from experience this will only get worse for Kara. I both dread what is to come, yet eagerly await the next installment.
Well done, Alec.
| romeoharvey chapter 2 . 2/14/2007
Oh man, this destroyed my happy mood... (Come on, a warning in the A/N is just like telling someone on a ladder not to look down..., the person now HAS to look down.)
Enough about me. This is a very good addition to the story. Please keep Kara strong in the coming chapters.
| Galactica Brit chapter 2 . 2/14/2007
as always your writing flows nice and smooth and evokes the scenes clearly. As you know I'm rather an angst junkie and this lovely little offering is nice and dark. Well done on another cracking twisted tale.
| Firewolfe chapter 2 . 2/14/2007
Dark but then you meant it to be. Normally I despise 2003 fics but this was interesting. Then again I hate Kara a lot but even she did not deserve that. But if it is a point you are making about choice and free will it is a good one.
| stardust2002 chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Actually you make lots of sense, despite your lack of sleep. :)
I really like this - I should get my hubby to read it. We've had endless discussions about Kara's attitude and how she ended up the way she did after being rescued. Of course we only saw about 3 minutes of her captivity so it's hard to know - but your explanation makes a heck of a lot of sense.
I"m looking forward to the rest, despite the darkness.