Reviews for Conflict
littlen00bgyn chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Rainvice (8:20:09 PM): YES!

Hedi Dracona (8:20:13 PM): ?

Rainvice (8:20:19 PM): This is the reward for that utter tripe I just read.

Hedi Dracona (8:20:24 PM): ?

Rainvice (8:20:35 PM): Conflict by 13th Dead End

Hedi Dracona (8:20:48 PM): What's it about?

Rainvice (8:21:02 PM): HIIK. I'm only on page 2 of 4. (I printed it out)

Rainvice (8:21:15 PM): Basically Xemnas is raping Saix.

Hedi Dracona (8:21:16 PM): HIIK ?

Rainvice (8:21:20 PM): Hell If I Know

Hedi Dracona (8:21:23 PM): Ah

Hedi Dracona (8:21:58 PM): Also, re: Xemnas raping Saix: One can't rape the willing.

Hedi Dracona (8:22:01 PM): Just saying

Rainvice (8:22:25 PM): Xemnas: If you really didn't want m e, you would have left by now. You can hurt me, you are very capable, then teleport away."

Saix: I fear the punishment for doing that.

Xemnas: And rightly so.

Saix: Leave me alone!

Xemnas: I don't like it when yhou're so unwilling...

Hedi Dracona (8:22:43 PM): wtf

Rainvice (8:22:44 PM): (eff you typing)

Rainvice (8:23:00 PM): I know it's totally OOC, but just YES

Rainvice (8:24:08 PM): Xemnas: Don't struggle. Just relax.

Saix: No. I don't want to! This is assault, sir!

Xemnas: Pff. Assault, my ass.

Rainvice (8:24:13 PM): Nice wording

Hedi Dracona (8:24:20 PM): Indeed

Rainvice (8:24:21 PM): "Voodoo dick my ass!"

Hedi Dracona (8:24:39 PM): Also: Saix would totally be playing along

Rainvice (8:24:45 PM): Totally!

Hedi Dracona (8:24:49 PM): Because he's a powerwhore

Rainvice (8:25:00 PM): A sexy power whore

Hedi Dracona (8:25:03 PM): very

Rainvice (8:25:19 PM): I think rape would work better between I and XI

Rainvice (8:25:37 PM): It's a perfect diorama for their power struggle.

Hedi Dracona (8:25:37 PM): Also: All the easier to shank the hell out of someone when they're naked

Rainvice (8:25:46 PM): YES

Rainvice (8:26:11 PM): Re: Voodoo Dick: Do you know the reference?

Hedi Dracona (8:27:28 PM): no, sadly

Rainvice (8:28:27 PM): A guy goes to town on business but buys his wife a special dildo from fear of infidelity. The clerk sells him Voodoo Dick, which will literally go where you tell it to.

Hedi Dracona (8:29:16 PM): wtf

Rainvice (8:29:21 PM): Well, he forgets how to tell her how to make it stop, and she can't pull it out. She's going to the hospital, but she's driving all crazy-like, and she gets pulled over.

Rainvice (8:29:35 PM): The cop asks if she's inebriated, and she says, No, I have a voodoo dick inside me.

Rainvice (8:29:41 PM): The cop doesn't believe her...

Hedi Dracona (8:29:48 PM): WHAT. THE. FUCK.

Rainvice (8:29:53 PM): He says, "Yeah, right. Voodoo Dick my ass!"

Hedi Dracona (8:30:02 PM): Oh no. XD

Rainvice (8:30:15 PM): Ironically I was listening to Inside of You while typing that

Rainvice (8:30:42 PM): But... yeah, Xemnas saying Assault, my ass brought that to mind

Rainvice (8:31:05 PM): Aw MAN!

Rainvice (8:31:10 PM): This ending is made of suck and fail.

Rainvice (8:32:27 PM): It ends on a cliffhanger. I like what leads up to it, but the ending itself is fail.

Rainvice (8:33:20 PM): Saix: Fine. I'm yours to do with as you please.

Xemnas: Sudden change of mind?

Saix: No. I am under your command. Now get your pleasure over wtih, please.

Xemnas [annoyed]: Drop the formality. I don't want to take you unwilling.

Saix [surprised]: You don't.

Xemnas: No. I want you willingly mine.

Saix: I have a choice?

Xemnas: Yes, you do.

Saix [relaxing]: I will be yours, but not now, please?

Xemnas: Alright then. Not now. But you will be mine one day, Saix.

I feel like it should have picked up, like, TEN MONTHS LATER or something

Rainvice (8:34:18 PM): But it ends with... "Slowly and softly, Saix drifted off into a peaceful sleep, his last thought being that of Xemnas's arms."

T_T That's not even worth being labeled M for! I feel so cheated.

Still, Xem reminds me of...well, me three years ago... so I feel obligated to fav this.
UzamakiKitsune chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Please write a I,X fic for Kingdom Hearts. This wasn't bad but quite good but me personally think of Saix as more animalistic.
Esinahs chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
good job. you did really good with their characters
Polish chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
*Hands you pills* Get some rest and you'll be good as new in the morning. Great fic!
DarogaDaae chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Got the perfect thing for you to play around with: Zemyx. Emo boy plus ultra perky equals fun for the fangirls and readers!

I no longer know which one I like more, XemnasxSaix, of SephirothxXemnas...
CodeLyoko chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Aw poor Saix was unwilling XDD
therichnobody chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Didn't finish. Full review later.
Laura chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
i like it i like it i like it !XD w saix&xem! i like ur writing, hoping u'll write something else about this characters! (sorry if my english is a shit.. i'm italian)
Weregon chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Aw poor Saix! Rape isn't funny, rape isn't funny, rape isn't funny. (pfft, Who am I fooling? HECK YEAH IT IS!) *cough* So erm... yeah. I thought it would be worse, kinda... maybe hoped it would be? *shot* So erm... The Nobodies don't have shirts under their coats? *goes to investigate, tackles Roxas*
Jacceh chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Dwaaw that was cute I liked that, I knew Saix couldn't resist him
A Moonlit Shadow chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Don't say it isn't good! I thought it was nice. :3
Zaxel chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Aw! Cute! I can't wait to see more of your work. You did a great job with this one!

You shouldn't put yourself down! You're a great fanfic writer! *hugs you* I luv your fics!

So you want to try another pairing? Hmm... well, I'm trying a new one myself. How about Demyx and Zexion? They're popular and they actually work well too.
TwistedAffection chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
awe~! this was so cute! omg i loved this! you simply must update ASAP! u
GenKirby chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
Write some more Xemnas x Saïx next! xD
LittleBrick chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
wow...saix and xemnas are so in character!

“This is assault, sir!”