|Reviews for Conflict|
| littlen00bgyn chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Rainvice (8:20:09 PM): YES!
Hedi Dracona (8:20:13 PM): ?
Rainvice (8:20:19 PM): This is the reward for that utter tripe I just read.
Hedi Dracona (8:20:24 PM): ?
Rainvice (8:20:35 PM): Conflict by 13th Dead End
Hedi Dracona (8:20:48 PM): What's it about?
Rainvice (8:21:02 PM): HIIK. I'm only on page 2 of 4. (I printed it out)
Rainvice (8:21:15 PM): Basically Xemnas is raping Saix.
Hedi Dracona (8:21:16 PM): HIIK ?
Rainvice (8:21:20 PM): Hell If I Know
Hedi Dracona (8:21:23 PM): Ah
Hedi Dracona (8:21:58 PM): Also, re: Xemnas raping Saix: One can't rape the willing.
Hedi Dracona (8:22:01 PM): Just saying
Rainvice (8:22:25 PM): Xemnas: If you really didn't want m e, you would have left by now. You can hurt me, you are very capable, then teleport away."
Saix: I fear the punishment for doing that.
Xemnas: And rightly so.
Saix: Leave me alone!
Xemnas: I don't like it when yhou're so unwilling...
Hedi Dracona (8:22:43 PM): wtf
Rainvice (8:22:44 PM): (eff you typing)
Rainvice (8:23:00 PM): I know it's totally OOC, but just YES
Rainvice (8:24:08 PM): Xemnas: Don't struggle. Just relax.
Saix: No. I don't want to! This is assault, sir!
Xemnas: Pff. Assault, my ass.
Rainvice (8:24:13 PM): Nice wording
Hedi Dracona (8:24:20 PM): Indeed
Rainvice (8:24:21 PM): "Voodoo dick my ass!"
Hedi Dracona (8:24:39 PM): Also: Saix would totally be playing along
Rainvice (8:24:45 PM): Totally!
Hedi Dracona (8:24:49 PM): Because he's a powerwhore
Rainvice (8:25:00 PM): A sexy power whore
Hedi Dracona (8:25:03 PM): very
Rainvice (8:25:19 PM): I think rape would work better between I and XI
Rainvice (8:25:37 PM): It's a perfect diorama for their power struggle.
Hedi Dracona (8:25:37 PM): Also: All the easier to shank the hell out of someone when they're naked
Rainvice (8:25:46 PM): YES
Rainvice (8:26:11 PM): Re: Voodoo Dick: Do you know the reference?
Hedi Dracona (8:27:28 PM): no, sadly
Rainvice (8:28:27 PM): A guy goes to town on business but buys his wife a special dildo from fear of infidelity. The clerk sells him Voodoo Dick, which will literally go where you tell it to.
Hedi Dracona (8:29:16 PM): wtf
Rainvice (8:29:21 PM): Well, he forgets how to tell her how to make it stop, and she can't pull it out. She's going to the hospital, but she's driving all crazy-like, and she gets pulled over.
Rainvice (8:29:35 PM): The cop asks if she's inebriated, and she says, No, I have a voodoo dick inside me.
Rainvice (8:29:41 PM): The cop doesn't believe her...
Hedi Dracona (8:29:48 PM): WHAT. THE. FUCK.
Rainvice (8:29:53 PM): He says, "Yeah, right. Voodoo Dick my ass!"
Hedi Dracona (8:30:02 PM): Oh no. XD
Rainvice (8:30:15 PM): Ironically I was listening to Inside of You while typing that
Rainvice (8:30:42 PM): But... yeah, Xemnas saying Assault, my ass brought that to mind
Rainvice (8:31:05 PM): Aw MAN!
Rainvice (8:31:10 PM): This ending is made of suck and fail.
Rainvice (8:32:27 PM): It ends on a cliffhanger. I like what leads up to it, but the ending itself is fail.
Rainvice (8:33:20 PM): Saix: Fine. I'm yours to do with as you please.
Xemnas: Sudden change of mind?
Saix: No. I am under your command. Now get your pleasure over wtih, please.
Xemnas [annoyed]: Drop the formality. I don't want to take you unwilling.
Saix [surprised]: You don't.
Xemnas: No. I want you willingly mine.
Saix: I have a choice?
Xemnas: Yes, you do.
Saix [relaxing]: I will be yours, but not now, please?
Xemnas: Alright then. Not now. But you will be mine one day, Saix.
I feel like it should have picked up, like, TEN MONTHS LATER or something
Rainvice (8:34:18 PM): But it ends with... "Slowly and softly, Saix drifted off into a peaceful sleep, his last thought being that of Xemnas's arms."
T_T That's not even worth being labeled M for! I feel so cheated.
Still, Xem reminds me of...well, me three years ago... so I feel obligated to fav this.
| UzamakiKitsune chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Please write a I,X fic for Kingdom Hearts. This wasn't bad but quite good but me personally think of Saix as more animalistic.
| Esinahs chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
good job. you did really good with their characters
| Polish chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
*Hands you pills* Get some rest and you'll be good as new in the morning. Great fic!
| DarogaDaae chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Got the perfect thing for you to play around with: Zemyx. Emo boy plus ultra perky equals fun for the fangirls and readers!
I no longer know which one I like more, XemnasxSaix, of SephirothxXemnas...
| CodeLyoko chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
Aw poor Saix was unwilling XDD
| therichnobody chapter 1 . 3/28/2007
Didn't finish. Full review later.
| Laura chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
i like it i like it i like it !XD w saix&xem! i like ur writing, hoping u'll write something else about this characters! (sorry if my english is a shit.. i'm italian)
| Weregon chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Aw poor Saix! Rape isn't funny, rape isn't funny, rape isn't funny. (pfft, Who am I fooling? HECK YEAH IT IS!) *cough* So erm... yeah. I thought it would be worse, kinda... maybe hoped it would be? *shot* So erm... The Nobodies don't have shirts under their coats? *goes to investigate, tackles Roxas*
| Jacceh chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Dwaaw that was cute I liked that, I knew Saix couldn't resist him
| A Moonlit Shadow chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Don't say it isn't good! I thought it was nice. :3
| Zaxel chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Aw! Cute! I can't wait to see more of your work. You did a great job with this one!
You shouldn't put yourself down! You're a great fanfic writer! *hugs you* I luv your fics!
So you want to try another pairing? Hmm... well, I'm trying a new one myself. How about Demyx and Zexion? They're popular and they actually work well too.
| TwistedAffection chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
awe~! this was so cute! omg i loved this! you simply must update ASAP! u
| GenKirby chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
Write some more Xemnas x Saïx next! xD
| LittleBrick chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
wow...saix and xemnas are so in character!
“This is assault, sir!”