Reviews for Atlantis Mermaid
Monki-Neko chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
Wow still in character yet empathetic mckay. Awesome job on the characterization and storyline, esp for a short story. Also love that yoy were able to take a classic fairy tale and turn it on its side.
Spidey-phd chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Interesting twist.

I always love McKay!
Azamiko chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Very cool. No chance of a sequel?
MysticFireBlood chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
This was a very intresting story. I would have never guest McKay was a meriman. I like how you was able to make it work out.
TimetravelingArchaeologist chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
Different but well done!
Lee chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Awesome story. Well written. I like your original character and the way you told the story.

I'm partially hoping for Mckay/Muriel now. :) Well I'll look around for more of your writing.

I think this tells a whole story but a sequel would definately be cool. :D ;)
Lishel Fracrium chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
aww that was sweet. but really sad too.
Korilian chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
And then they fell in love and didn't live in agony forever, because OMG!
korilian chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
... And then they fell in love right? Right? They didn't spend the rest of their lifes in agony right? Yikes.

This was lovely. Should you ever feel the burning need to write a sequel, just let me know and I'll be there with pompons and hearthy cheers!
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Different, but I liked it.
AbsolutAnda chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
I like that you didn't draw this out forever like some people do.

I really liked it.

Splendid job!
Padme4000 chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
i really liked this and McKay a merman in my mind if that was true he would be even more lovable. i hope you write more of your oc and mckay as merpeople. or maybe more chapters intead of being a one shot.
Jammeke chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
Very nice!
serenitysowl chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
Rodlox chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
I find myself being a Rodney/Muriel shipper now.

an excellent story.
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